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3.Give the examples of coherence and cohesion in one text, then analyze them.
1. Introduction
Characteristics:
of any length
(5) a. He put on his pajamas, got into bed, turned off the light and went to sleep.
b. He put on his pajamas, got into bed, went to sleep and turned off the light.
Summary:
different approaches emphasize different aspects of context. (cf. Halliday & Hymes)
we can make predictions or inferences from text to context and from context to text:
In-class exercise:
Make inferences about the context of situation for each of the following. Tell how you arrived at your
inferences (through field, tenor, mode, content, cultural knowledge, particular structures, forms of
the sentences, and/or lexical relationships)?
1. Once upon a time... (... and they lived happily ever after)
3. Four hearts.
9. Move battery holding down bolts, or hook bolts at both ends of battery....
2. Textuality: Cohesion and Coherence
(6) a. John wants to visit his girlfriend. Mr. Smith lives in a small village nearby. The vacuum cleaner
didn't work.
The barber down the street couldn't help. The last paper had been sold. It is going to be a
long dull talk.
b. John wants to visit his girlfriend. Mary lives in a small village nearby. The car wouldn't start.
The garage down the street couldn't help. The last bus had already left. It is going to be a
long hot walk.
coherence connection through non-textual pragmatic knowledge: concepts & relationships must
be relevant to each other (e.g. car-garage);
(7) The store no longer sold porcelain figurines. It used to, but they didn't sell very well...
B: I'm sorry.
(9) A week has seven days. Every day I feed my cat. Cats have four legs. The cat is on the mat. Mat
has three letters.
B: Yes, I can.
Cohesion is part of the text-forming component in the linguistic system. It is the means whereby
structurally unrelated elements are linked together, through the dependence of one on the other for
its interpretation. That is,
semantic concept which refers to relations of meaning within a text, i.e. text-bound;
expressed partly through grammar (reference, substitution, ellipsis, conjunction) and partly
through vocabulary (reiteration, collocation)
Tie: a set of cohesively related items, which enable us to give a systematic account of
patterns of texture. (e.g. John and Tom - they: above)
3. Types of cohesion
A. Grammatical Cohesion
(i) Reference
reference refers to the dependent relationship between the referring and the referred in a text;
the referring item can be pronouns; demonstratives; the article the, and such.
(13) The schoolmaster was leaving the village, and everybody seemed sorry. The miller at
Cresscombe lent him the small white tilted cart and horse to carry his goods to the city of his
destination, about twenty miles off, such a vehicle proving of quite sufficient size for the departing
teacher's effects.
Reference:
(14) It rained day and night for two weeks. The basement flooded and everything was under water. It
spoilt all our calculations.
(15) a. And the living room was a very small room with two windows that wouldn't open and things
like that. And it/?that looked nice. It/?That had a beautiful brick wall.
b. You entered into a tiny little hallway and the kitchen was off that.
it to established topic
Cataphoric reference: forward pointing within text; reference to oncoming item in text
(17) This is how to get the best results. You let the berries dry in the sun, till all the moisture has gone
out of them. Then you gather them up and chop them very fine.
(18) Dear Abby: There's this guy I've been going with for near three years. Well, the problem is that he
hits me. He started last year. He has done it only four or five times, but each time it was worse than
before. Every time he hits me it was because he thought I was flirting (I wasn't). Last time he accused
me of coming on to a friend of his. First he called me a lot of dirty names, then he punched my face so
bad it left me with a black eye and black-and-blue bruises over half of my face. It was very noticeable,
so I told my folks that the car I was riding in stopped suddenly and my face hit the windshield.
Abby, he's 19 and I'm 17, and already I feel like an old married lady who lets her husband push her
around. I haven't spoken to him since this happened. He keeps bugging me to give him one more
chance. I think I've given him enough chances. Should I keep avoiding him or what?
(19) A guy I haven't seen in years has just called me and ...
referent as part of a shared world, such as social institutions (i.e. context of culture):
c. She went into a restaurant and asked the waiter for the menu.
(20) a. one(s): She likes red ribbons, but her sister likes green ones.
c. so/not: Do you need help? If so, I'll stay; if not, I'll go.
d. same: They went to the cafeteria, and I did the same.
Reference Substitution
Pronouns definite
coreferential indefinite
not coreferential
Pro-verbals - +
(21) If you take the green tie, I'll take the blue _.
(iv) Conjunction: signals relationship between discourse segments (and, but, or, though, then,
because...)
b. I've lived here ten years and I've never heard of him.
clarification: or rather;
variation: alternatively;
spatio-temporal: there/previously;
B. Lexical cohesion
(25) There was a large mushroom growing near her, about the same height as herself; and, when she
had looked under it, it occurred to her that she might as well look and see what was on the top of it...
She stretched herself up on tiptoe, and peeped over the edge of the mushroom...{}
synonym:
(26) Accordingly... I took leave, and turned to the ascent of the peak. The climb is perfectly easy...
(27) There was a fine old rocking-chair that his father used to sit in, a desk where he wrote letters, a
nest of small tables and a dark, imposing bookcase. Now all this furniture was to be sold, and with it
his own past.
general word:
(28) Can you tell me where to stay in Vancouver? I've never been to the place before.
Other examples: Human: people, person, man, woman, child, boy, girl
Place: place
(ii) Collocation: association of lexical items that regularly co-occur due to some recognizable
lexico-semantic relation, such as
opposites
part-whole
General principle: Lexical cohesion is created if items which tend to appear in the same lexical
environment (i.e. sharing similar patterns of collocation) occur in adjacent sentences.
4. Cohesion and coherence analysis in applied linguistics
(30)
"... I had stroke... blood pressure... low pressure... period... Ah... pass out... Uh... Rosa and I, and...
friends... of mine... uh... uh... shore... uh drink, talk, pass out..."
"...Hahnemann Hospital... uh, uh I... uh uh wife, Rosa... uh... take... uh... love... ladies... uh Ocean
uh Hospital and transfer Hahnemann Hospital ambulance... uh... half'n hour... uh... uh it's... uh...
motion, motion... uh... bad... patient... I uh... flat on the back... um... it's... uh... shaved, shaved...
nurse, shaved me... uh... shaved me, nurse... [sigh]... wheel chair... uh... Hahnemann Hospital... a
week, a week... uh... then uh... strength... uh... mood... uh... up... uh... legs and arms, left side uh...
weak... and... Moss Hospital... two week... no, two months..."
Conclusion:
However, without grammatical cohesion, even coherent discourse becomes laborious, clumsy,
and faltered;
Possible project: analyze cohesion & coherence of child language, second language, aphasics,
or pidgin
References
Givon, T. 1995. "Coherence in text vs. coherence in mind". In M.A. Gernsbacher & T. Givon (eds.)
Salkie, R. 1995. Text and Discourse Analysis, chap 1. London: Routledge. {P 302 S25 1995}
Van Dijk, T. 1977. Text and Context: Explorations in the semantics and pragmatics of discourse. chap 4:
98-99. London: Longman. {P 302 D5 1980}
Coherence
Coherence is sometimes called cohesion, even though some would claim that the two
terms denote phenomena that are obviously related, but clearly different. We use
coherence to cover both the extent to which a text hangs together, as it were, and the
various linguistic and structural means of achieving this coherence.
In a coherent text, there are logical links between the words, sentences, and
paragraphs of the text. The term comes from the Latin verb co-haerere, which means
'to stick together' (OED). Another way to describe coherence is to say that it has to do
with good and smooth text flow. A writer must maximise understanding of a text by
making it as clear and logical as possible.
Coherence can be achieved in a number of ways. Oshima & Hogue (2006) suggest the
following four:
Starting with the last point, for the reason that it is a paramount aspect, any academic
text will be incomprehensible unless the ideas expressed in it are arranged in some
sort of logical fashion.
There are several different kinds of logical order, but some of the more frequently
used are chronology, importance, and contrast. Chronology, firstly, has to do with
time, and in terms of logic, events are ordered in a sequence. Secondly, importance
means that ideas are discussed in a sequence which implies either a increasing or
decreasing order of importance. Thirdly, contrast has to do with ordering ideas by
contrasting or comparing them.
The last but one point - transition signals (sometimes called linking words or
linking adverbials) - has to do with the use of specific words and phrases that evoke
links and transition between ideas.
As was emphasised above, there is no substitute for ordering the various ideas and
parts of a text in a logical way. However, even when this is done in a satisfactory
manner, there is often a need to strengthen the organisational pattern of a text passage
by inserting logical markers.
There is a multitude of words and phrases like these, and they can be grouped in
different classes based on the function they serve. The link below will take you to a
list of different transitional and linking words.
A list of linking words for different purposes
(Bjrk & Risnen 1997) (click to
expand/contract)
Purpose/function Connective words (linking words)
The point called using consistent pronouns has to do with substituting nouns with
pronouns in an effective way. A text that does not use pronouns to some extent will
come across as overly repetitive. The important part when using pronouns is to be
consistent by using the same person and number throughout the paragraph or text.
Click on the link below to see a comparison between a text with and without
pronouns.
The director said that the director was in a hurry. The director was late for picking the
director's sister up at the airport, but the director did not know where the airport was.
Presence of suitable pronouns
The director said that he was in a hurry. He was late for picking his sister up at the
airport, but he did not know where it was.
The fourth way to achieve coherence in a text passage is to repeat key nouns.
However, even if nouns typically are the words that should be repeated, also words
from other word classes can be repeated if they are central to the topic of the text.
There is no set rule as to how often a key noun can be repeated - the guiding principle
must be clarity and an avoidance of making the reader feel that there is too much
repetition.
An alternative to repeating a key noun over and over is to use another noun that has
the same, or at least very similar, meaning: a synonym.
Click on the link below to see an example of effective repetition of key nouns.
Definition of coherence
1 : the quality or state of cohering: such asa : systematic or logical connection or consistency
The essay as a whole lacks coherence.b : integration of diverse elements, relationships, or values
The various parts of this housediscrete in color, in shape, in placementjoin together with
remarkable coherence. Paul Goldberger
2: the property of being coherent a plan that lacks coherence
C2 the situation when the parts of something fit together in a natural or reasonable way:
There was no coherence between the first and the second half of the movie.
Coherence (kohrns )
uncountable noun
Coherence is a state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together well so that they form a
united whole.
coherence
2. the quality of being logically integrated, consistent, and intelligible; congruity his story lacked
coherence
3. Physics that property of a set of waves or sources of waves in which the oscillations maintain a
fixed relationship to each other Also coherency
Websters New World College Dictionary, 4th Edition. Copyright 2010 by Houghton Mifflin Harcourt.
All rights reserved.
Coherence means the connection of ideas at the idea level, and cohesion means the
connection of ideas at the sentence level. Basically, coherence refers to the rhetorical
aspects of your writing, which include developing and supporting your argument (e.g.
thesis statement development), synthesizing and integrating readings, organizing and
clarifying ideas. The cohesion of writing focuses on the grammatical aspects of
writing.
One of the practical tools that can help improve the coherence of your writing is to
use a concept map. The concept map is also known as reverse outline since you
make an outline of your paper after you have finished the main ideas of your paper.
Write down the main idea of each paragraphwhich is called a topic sentenceon a
blank piece of paper. Check to see if the topic sentences are connected to the thesis
statement of your paper or if you have strayed from your main argument. As you
repeat this process, it will help you become more aware of how to develop your
argument coherently and how to organize your ideas effectively. Here is a concept
map template you can use.
Here are some examples that illustrate the importance of connecting your ideas more
effectively in writing.
The hotel is famous. It is one of the most well-known hotels in the country. The latest
international dancing competition was held at the hotel. The hotel spent a lot of
money to advertise the event. Because the hotel wanted to gain international
reputation. But not many people attended the event. (The connection of ideas is not
very good.)
The hotel, which is one of the most well-known hotels in this region, wanted to
promote its image around the world by hosting the latest international dancing
competition. Although the event was widely advertised, not many people participated
in the competition. (The connection of ideas is better than in the first example.)
The latest international dancing competition was held at the hotel, which is one of the
most well-known hotels in this region. The hotel spent a lot of money on advertising
the event since it wanted to enhance its international reputation; however, it failed to
attract many people. (The connection of ideas is better than in the first example.)
With logical bridges, the same idea of a topic is carried over (repeated) from sentence to
sentence, and successive sentences can be constructed in parallel form. With verbal
bridges, key words or synonymous words can be repeated, pronouns can replace nouns
and transition words (as shown below) can be used. In the paragraph below, words and
phrases that serve to increase the coherence of the paragraph are highlight and
underlined. As this sample paragraph indicates, coherence and cohesion in a paragraph
is established by combining more than one device.
Example Remarks
Example / Result /
Addition Attitude Contrast / Comparison
Explanation Reason
however,
so,
nevertheless,
naturally,
consequently,
on the contrary,
moreover,
for example, certainly,
thus,
in contrast,
furthermore,
for instance, fortunately,
as a result,
on the one hand, . . . on
in addition,
that is, undoubtedly, the other hand,
for this reason,
additionally,
In other strangely in comparison,
owing to this,
words, enough,
and
of course, still,
therefore,
predictably,
yet,
accordingly,
but
Time Summary Order Back reference
Back referencing is another effective device for creating coherence, but this device must
be used carefully because it can cause confusion rather than create clarity. Consider
whether or not the use of back referencing is clear in the following example
Example Remarks
It is perfectly acceptable to use back referencing, just be sure to make it clear. One way to
do this, as exemplified in the remarks above, is to add a summary word to the back
reference (e.g. this situation, where situation is the summary word). Using a summary
word specifies the back reference, often making it much clearer.
In Summary
o carry the same idea of a topic over from sentence to sentence, i.e.
successive sentences are constructed in parallel form
e.g. In the first stage, an idea can be generated by using a mind-map and some
discussion. In the next stage, a clear plan of action can be produced in the form of a list.
e.g. There are three stages to the pre-writing process: one to effect the generation of ideas,
another to facilitate an action plan, and the third to research the information to be included
in your text. In the first stage, an idea can be generated by using a mind-map and some
discussion.
e.g. writing is a process, which can take a long time and involve many
obstacles. However, when you are finished, youll see that it was worth the effort.