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Feedback:
LO1 Research
You havent referenced anything in your secondary research
You need to undertake research on CGI (as this was in your production) as was Lee Smith and Alfred Hitchcock
More video analysis of some of the important films you discuss such as Psycho and Avatar
LO2 Production
Nice opening and nice editing! Your voice over becomes a little dull you need more enthusiasm in your voice if you are going to re-shoot
another production in this style
LO3 Evaluation
You should try to actually compare your work with other productions give examples
Learner Name: Joe Maine Learner Signature: Date: 20/10/17