iFixit Resume

by Lauren Hays

Submission date: 31-Aug-2017 11:45AM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 841714137
File name: iFixit_Resume.docx (123.59K)
Word count: 234
Character count: 1507
 Lauren, Your resume includes evidence
that you can organize a group--good! Your
design is also effective. You are missing
some details, though. See below.

which
other
manage
ment
position
?

act ions not t rait s

Bullet s--great !

Whit e Space
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Text Comment. Lauren, Your resume includes evidence that you can organize a group--
good! Your design is also ef f ective. You are missing some details, though. See below.

Text Comment. which other management position?

QM actions not traits

Remember, everyone writes admired traits in their resumes--anyone can say this. What you
need in a resume is actions that demonstrate these traits.

QM Bullets--great!
Great use of consistent syntax and grammar in bullet points.

QM White Space
White space is used to set sections apart. Avoid cramming headings and paragraphs together
and f ollow this common rule f or headings:
two white lines bef ore a heading, one white line af ter the heading. When creating columns
(which are vertical), separate them with vertical white space.
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CRIT ERION 1 Advanced

Form and Organization

ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant

DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate

ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing

CRIT ERION 3 Prof icient

Appearance

ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Advanced

Readability

ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.
DEVELOPING Bullet Point clauses/phrases may be hard to understand or structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability at times

PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
errors

ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

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SIMILARIT Y INDEX
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INT ERNET SOURCES
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PUBLICAT IONS
12%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to EDMC
St udent Paper 7%
2
Submitted to Colorado Technical University
Online
5%
St udent Paper

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