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Angelica Fuentes

English

Professor Batty

11 December 2017

Monster Reflection

The essay I choose to revised is about a novel named Dead Until Dark by Charlaine

Harris and I was assigned to explain who the monster in this novel. Most importantly I had to

explain why the monster was the monster. By the graded I received is good, I give a 85 meaning

it was good but not perfect. I believe I had a good thesis sentence, however my title Monster

was not creative so I change into Humans Vs Vampires. This is because in this novel everyone

especially Sookie is looking for the murder but it's common sense to choose the vampires as the

monster so I think Humans Vs Vampires is a good title. In this essay there were small error, for

example I missed spelled a few small error such as unknow. There was also grammar errors

with singular and pular such theres and ect. In this essay I gave a good counter argument and

I did well in explaining the monster. I gave a few themes which were racism and sex and I gave

compared to some examples of the real world such Martin Lurther King and equal rights. In

additional, I explain in psycholligalogy lens what cause the monster to become the monster and

related to real life situations and relationships with human being and how it can affect someone.