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range of key words read on sight some specific, straightforward simple, plausible inference about events and some awareness of use of features of some effective language choices noted, e.g. some awareness that writers have viewpoints and general features of a few text types identified,
Level unfamiliar words decoded using information recalled, e.g. names of information, using evidence from text e.g. organisation, e.g. beginning and ending of ‘slimy’ is a good word there purposes, e.g. ‘it tells you how to do something’, ‘she e.g. information books, stories, print media
2 appropriate strategies, e.g. characters, main ingredients how a character is feeling, what makes a story, types of punctuation some familiar patterns of language identified, thinks it’s not fair’ some awareness that books are set in different
blending sounds generally clear idea of where to look plant grow e.g. once upon a time; first, next, last simple statements about likes and dislikes in reading, times and places
some fluency and expression, e.g. for information, e.g. about comments based on textual cues, sometimes sometimes with reasons
taking account of punctuation, characters, topics misunderstood
speech marks
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reasonable inference at a basic level, e.g. some awareness of meaning of simple text comments on obvious features of language, e.g. some simple comments about preferences, mostly a few basic features of well-known story and
some high frequency and familiar some simple points from familiar identifying who is speaking in a story features, e.g. font style, labels, titles rhymes and refrains, significant words and linked to own experience information texts distinguished, e.g. what
words read fluently and texts recalled
comments/questions about meaning of parts
phrases typically happens to good and bad characters,
Level automatically
some pages/sections of interest of text, e.g. details of illustrations diagrams,
differences between type of text in which photos
1 decode familiar and some located, e.g. favourite changes in font style
or drawings used
unfamiliar words using blending as characters/events
the prime approach /information/pictures
some awareness of punctuation
marks, e.g. pausing at full stops
Name ……………..……………. Assessing Pupils’ Progress
Assessment criteria: Writing
AF5 - vary sentences for clarity, AF6 - write with technical AF3 - organise and present whole AF4 - construct paragraphs and use AF1 - write imaginative, AF2 - produce texts which are AF7 - select appropriate and AF8 - use correct spelling Handwriting and presentation
purpose and effect accuracy of syntax and texts effectively, sequencing and cohesion within and between interesting and thoughtful appropriate to task, reader and effective vocabulary
punctuation in phrases, structuring information, ideas and paragraphs texts purpose
clauses and sentences events
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing
Level sentence structure is imaginative, precise and accurate, matched to imaginative, well controlled structuring of subject matter and management of creative selection and adaptation of a wide range of forms and conventions wide ranging vocabulary used correct spelling throughout
8 writer’s purpose and intended effect on the reader paragraphing provide textual coherence and cohesion to position the reader to meet varied writing challenges with distinctive personal voice and style imaginatively and with precision
appropriately in relation to the writer’s purpose matched to intended effect
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing
variety of sentence types deployed judiciously across the text to information, ideas and events skillfully paragraphing across the text is imaginative and generally successful adaptation of wide range of forms and vocabulary consistently, often correct spelling throughout
achieve purpose and overall effect, with rare loss of control managed and shaped to achieve integral to meaning and purpose, e.g. conventions to suit variety of purposes and audiences, e.g. deliberate imaginatively, well matched to
a range of features employed to shape/craft sentences that have intended purpose and effect, e.g. paragraph length and complexity reference to other texts or textual conventions for effect or emphasis purpose and audience
individual merit and contribute to overall development of the text, e.g. introduction and development of varied to match narrative pace or well judged, distinctive individual voice or point of view established and range of vocabulary generally varied
embedded phrases and clauses that support succinct explanation; character, plot, event, or the terms of development of argument; varied sustained throughout, e.g. consistent handling of narrator’s persona in and ambitious, often judiciously
Level secure control of complex verb forms; antithesis, repetition or an argument, are paced across the devices to link or juxtapose fiction; well controlled use of original turns of phrase in formal discursive chosen
7 balance in sentence structure text paragraphs; paragraph structure writing
a variety of devices position the repeated for effect generally successful and consistent control of appropriate level of formality
reader, e.g. skilful control of individual paragraphs shaped or and varied range of stylistic devices to achieve intended effect, e.g. varying
information flow to reader; teasing the crafted for imaginative or rhetorical the level of formality within a piece for effect; direct address to the reader or
reader by drawing attention to how effect, e.g. last sentence echoing the taking the reader into their confidence
the narrative or argument is being first; lengthy single sentence
handled paragraph to convey inner monologue
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing
controlled use of a variety of syntax and full range of material is clearly controlled and construction of paragraphs clearly imaginative treatment of appropriate materials, familiarity with conventions vocabulary chosen generally generally correct spelling throughout, including
simple and complex sentences to punctuation are consistently sequenced, taking account of the supports meaning and purpose, e.g. of a variety of forms, adapting them when needed to suit purpose and appropriate to purpose and audience some
achieve purpose and contribute to accurate in a variety of reader’s likely reaction, e.g. paragraph topic signalled and then audience, not always successfully, e.g. deliberate use of inappropriate range of vocabulary generally varied o ambitious, uncommon words
overall effect sentence structures, with paragraphs of differing lengths, use of developed, withholding of information register for humour, clear emphasis on narration rather than plot and often ambitious, even though o words with complex sound/symbol
confident use of a range of occasional errors in flashback in narrative, anticipating for effect, thematic links between convincing, individual voice or point of view established and mostly choices not always apt relationships
Level sentence features to clarify or ambitious structures, e.g. reader’s questions paragraphs sustained throughout, e.g. authoritative expert view, convincing o words with unstressed syllables
6 emphasise meaning, e.g. fronted only occasional comma a range of features clearly signal within paragraphs, cohesive devices characterisation, adopting a role o multiletter vowel and consonant symbols
adverbials (“Reluctantly, he…, splices, some use of semi- overall direction of the text for the contribute to emphasis and effect, e.g. level of formality used for purpose and audience generally appropriate and likely errors:
Five days later, it…”), complex colons, not always accurate reader, e.g. opening paragraphs that adverbials as sentence starters a range of stylistic devices used to achieve effect, not always successfully, o occasionally in complex words such as
noun or prepositional phrases introduce themes clearly, paragraph e.g. controlled informality, generalisations or shifts between conversational outrageous, exaggerated, announcing,
markers, links between paragraphs style and more literary language parallel
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing
a variety of sentence lengths, full range of punctuation material is structured clearly, with paragraphs clearly structure main relevant ideas and material main purpose of writing is clear and vocabulary chosen for effect correct spelling of
structures and subjects provides used accurately to sentences organised into appropriate ideas across text to support purpose, developed with some consistently maintained reasonably wide vocabulary used, o grammatical function words
clarity and emphasis demarcate sentences, paragraphs e.g. clear chronological or logical links imaginative detail features of selected form clearly though not always appropriately o almost all inflected words
wider range of connectives used including speech punctuation development of material is effectively between paragraphs development of ideas and established with some adaptation to o most derivational suffixes and prefixes
to clarify relationship between syntax and punctuation managed across text, e.g. closings within paragraphs / sections, a range material appropriately shaped purpose o most content/lexical words
ideas, e.g. although, on the other within the sentence generally refer back to openings of devices support cohesion, e.g. for selected form, e.g. appropriate style clearly established likely errors
Level hand, meanwhile accurate including commas overall direction of the text supported secure use of pronouns, connectives, nominalization for succinctness to maintain reader’s interest o occasional phonetically plausible spelling of
5 some features of sentence to mark clauses, though by clear links between paragraphs references back to text clear viewpoint established, throughout unstressed syllables in content words
structure used to build up detail or some errors occur where links between paragraphs / sections generally consistent, with some o double consonants in prefixes
convey shades of meaning, e.g. ambitious structures are generally maintained across whole elaboration, e.g. some, uneven,
variation in word order, attempted text development of individual voice
expansions in verb phrases or characterisation in role
Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing Across a range of writing
some variety in length, structure or sentences demarcated ideas organised by clustering related paragraphs / sections help to relevant ideas and content main purpose of writing is clear but some evidence of deliberate correct spelling of
subject of sentences accurately throughout the points or by time sequence organise content, e.g. main idea chosen not always consistently maintained vocabulary choices o most common grammatical function words,
use of some subordinating text, including question ideas are organised simply with a usually supported or elaborated by some ideas and material main features of selected form are some expansion of general including adverbs with -ly formation
connectives, e.g. if, when, marks fitting opening and closing, following sentences developed in detail, e.g. clear and appropriate to purpose vocabulary to match topic o regularly formed content/lexical words,
Level because throughout the text speech marks to denote sometimes linked within paragraphs / sections, limited descriptions elaborated by style generally appropriate to task, including those with multiple morphemes
4 some variation, generally speech generally accurate, ideas or material generally in logical range of connections between adverbial and expanded noun though awareness of reader not o most past and present tense inflections,
accurate, in tense and verb forms with some other speech sequence but overall direction of sentences, e.g. over-use of ‘also’ or phrases always sustained plurals
punctuation writing not always clearly signalled pronouns straightforward viewpoint likely errors
commas used in lists and some attempts to establish simple generally established and o homophones of some common grammatical
occasionally to mark links between paragraphs / sections maintained, e.g. writing in role function words
clauses, although not always not always maintained, e.g. firstly, or maintaining a consistent o occasional phonetically plausible spelling in
accurately next stance content/lexical words
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reliance mainly on simply straightforward sentences some attempt to organise ideas with some internal structure within some appropriate ideas and purpose established at a general simple, generally appropriate correct spelling of legible style, shows accurate and
structured sentences, variation usually demarcated related points placed next to each sections of text e.g. one-sentence content included level vocabulary used, limited in range o some common grammatical function words consistent letter formation,
with support, e.g. some complex accurately with full stops, other paragraphs or ideas loosely some attempt to elaborate on main features of selected form some words selected for effect or o common content/lexical words with more than sometimes joined
sentences capital letters, question and openings and closings usually organised basic information or events, sometimes signalled to the reader occasion one morpheme, including compound words
Level and, but, so are the most common exclamation marks signalled within paragraphs / sections, some e.g. nouns expanded by simple some attempts at appropriate style, likely errors
3 connectives, subordination some, limited, use of speech some attempt to sequence ideas or links between sentences, e.g. use of adjectives with attention to reader o some inflected endings, e.g. past tense,
occasionally punctuation material logically pronouns or of adverbials attempt to adopt viewpoint, comparatives, adverbs
some limited variation in use of comma splicing evident, movement between paragraphs / though often not maintained or o some phonetically plausible attempts at
tense and verb forms, not always particularly in narrative sections sometimes abrupt or inconsistent, e.g. attitude content/lexical words
secure disjointed expressed, but with little
elaboration
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some variation in sentence clause structure mostly some basic sequencing of ideas or ideas in sections grouped by content, mostly relevant ideas and some basic purpose established, e.g. simple, often speech-like vocabulary usually correct spelling of letters generally correctly shaped
openings, e.g. not always starting grammatically correct material, e.g. time-related words or some linking by simple pronouns content, sometimes repetitive main features of story, report conveys relevant meanings o high frequency grammatical function words but inconsistencies in orientation,
with name or pronoun sentence demarcation with phrases, line breaks, headings, or sparse some appropriate features of the some adventurous word choices, e.g. o common single morpheme content/lexical size and use of upper/lower case
Level mainly simple sentences with and capital letters and full stops numbers some apt word choices create given form used opportune use of new vocabulary words letters
2 likely errors clear letter formation, with
used to connect clauses usually accurate openings and/or closings sometimes interest some attempts to adopt appropriate
ascenders and descenders
past and present tense generally some accurate use of signalled brief comments, questions style o inflected endings, e.g. past tense, plurals,
consistent question and exclamation about events or actions adverbs distinguished, generally upper and
o phonetic attempts at vowel digraphs lower case letters not mixed within
marks, and commas in lists suggest viewpoint
words
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reliance on simple phrases and mostly grammatically some formulaic phrases indicate simple connections between ideas, basic information and ideas some indication of basic purpose, mostly simple vocabulary words most letters correctly formed and
clauses accurate clauses start/end of text, e.g. once upon a events, e.g. repeated nouns, conveyed through appropriate particular form or awareness of communicates meaning through phonetically plausible attempts at words with orientated
Level
1
some sentence-like structures some awareness of use of time, one day, the end pronouns relate to main idea word choice, e.g. relate to reader, e.g. story, label, message repetition of key words digraphs and double letters spaces between words
formed by chaining clauses full stops and capital letters, events/ideas sometimes in topic sufficient number of recognisable words for upper and lower case sometimes
together, e.g. series of ideas e.g. beginning/end of appropriate order, e.g. actions listed some descriptive language, writing to be readable, including, e.g. use of letter distinguished
joined by repeated use of ‘and’ sentence in time sequence, items numbered e.g. colour, size, simple names to approximate syllables and words use of ICT, e.g. use keyboard to
emotion type own name