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Women in the 21st century: Ruiz, Destefano and Arce

Positive points
 The addition of interviews in the program is a good tool to illustrate the different
perspectives on the issue.
 Quoting different authors, authorities and/or activists in the field of feminism
 Good fluency in general
 With more time we could have done some edition on the audio.
Negative points
 Too much usage of cliché phrase “Oh my god!”
 Check some grammar mistakes: “IT (Frida Khalo) is my idol” “PINK” “(DID) you visit
Dubai?” “Follow (go on)” Taxis there are… (There are taxis…)”
 Some background noise.
 Fragmented audio.

Final Mark: 9 (nine)

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Humor: Picollo, Rios, Gonzales and Ortiz
Positive points
 Good sound effects
 Good sections, though there were some you did not include.
Negative points
 LANGUAGE!!: I DON’T THINK IT IS NECESSARY TO USE SO MANY IMPROPER WORDS TO
MAKE HUMOR.
 Too many jokes in Spanish, you could have included some more jokes in English.

Final Mark: 8 (eight)

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Gossip: Ruiz and Martinez
Positive aspects
 Smooth transitions between Spanish and English
 Good spontaneous comments
 Background music
 The audio played gives a more realistic appearance to the section
Negative points
 English is comments need improvement as regards fluency and grammar
 Too little English
 Too many monotones

Final Mark: 8 (eight)

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Games section: Galoppi
Positive aspects
 Very good voice tone
 Good fluency
 Good pronunciation
Negative points
 Too many tracks. Transitions are not smooth
 The information provided is good but you could have provided more details

Final Mark: 9 (nine)

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International music section: Cosentino
Positive aspects
 Very good criterion to choose sources of information
 Good organization: it was a good idea to include the first part of the tracks in addition to
the name of the tracks
Negative points
 The information provided is good but you could have provided more details
 There is no finishing marker for the end of the section

Final Mark: 8 (eight)

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International sport section: Valenzuela
Positive aspects
 Good information
 Good organization: the information is well presented and organized

Negative points
 Too much background noise.
 There is no finishing marker for the end of the section
 You could have added some information in English

Final Mark: 8 (eight)

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International sport section: Jurjo
Positive aspects
 Good information
 Good organization: the information is well presented and organized
 Good sounds and fluency

Negative points
 No background music
 There is no finishing marker for the end of the section

Final Mark: 9 (nine)

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Fashion section: Mendoza, Bota, Gimenez?
Positive aspects
 Great information, lots of details and colours (sometimes too technical)

Negative points
 No background music
 You could have added some spontaneous comments
 Too much of the information was presented in Spanish
 Your Spanish does not sound natural
 There is no finishing marker for the end of the section

Final Mark: 7 (seven)

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Anime and Manga section: Pereyra and Paquier
Positive aspects
 Nice background music
 Amazing Japanese-like edition
 I love One Punch Man! Good recommendation!
 Very good fluency

Negative points
 Background music and voice are almost at the same level

Final Mark: 10 (ten)

Taihen yoku dekimashita ! (Well Done!)
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Literature section: Flores, Gimenez, Mendoza, Cosentino and Zaracho
Positive aspects
 Good information, including observations as regards the movies and punctuation
 Good Fluency
 Smooth transitions between partners
Negative points
 No background music
 Ariadna’s part is noticeably different
 There is no closing remark

Final Mark: 9 (nine)

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Comic and technology Section: Villalba
Positive aspects
 Good fluency
 The comics selected are well described
 Very good organization, specially the “recommendations” section.
 Nice background music
 Reading users’ opinion provides trustworthy feedback, good choice
Negative points
 Audio quality could be better
 Transition between Spanish and English is not smooth
 You did not introduce yourself

Final Mark: 9 (nine)

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International Hockey Section: Zaracho and Pereyra
Positive aspects
 Good information
 Good organization

Negative points
 Fluency can be improved
 No background music
 No closing remark
 Check scripts for grammar mistakes (English)

Final Mark: 8 (eight)

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Rugby section: Doval
Positive aspects
 Good information, including comments on the matches
Negative points
 No background music
 There is no closing or opening remark
 Sound fades to an inaudible level
 There are some grammar mistakes, check the script

Final Mark: 7 (seven)