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Student Number: s1304567

Student Name: Erin Jones

Lecturer’s Name: Dr M. Smith

Unit Code: WXYZ34500

Learning to write
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Assignment Title: Sample essay

Due Date: 23/9/13

Date of Submission: 22.9.13

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Sample Essay: Essay title must
be title case
Title is Centred Without Bolding
(first letter of
Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop each word
capitalised) and
svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn am troep fmgnjr dfhme pramter centred. Do not
use bold.
vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo sehmnve heorthe wkejrh jfr jkh.

Ig taf spob mesk scrad fouse.1 Ripadal is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro
Your essay
ve twqlof scampor toc gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr tmasfet should be double
spaced and left
he jkh kjhey, renebbr le vjey ereyk.2 Crabnceop edpty brlaw repec bgtecfer justified. Font
should be
cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter. Percentages of responses Trebuchet MS or
Arial, Size 11.
appear in Table 1, cvbn am troep fmgnjr dfhme pramter vfrer nber covlrest
Margin of 2.54
fheop gertwqo sehmnve heorthe3 zop retsop leqmte feot frotrwibme resvghor cm all around.
Indent the first
fr tmasfet he jkh kjhey. Fope retsop ert ere fropel chrterq repvbto yerer fekd.4 line of each
paragraph.

Table 1. Overall responses (security to insecurity) to question types


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Rating
Question
type 1 2 3 4 5 6 Turabian uses
numbered
Matching 25.8 30.3 23.6 11.2 3.4 5.6 footnotes
True/false 31.4 25.8 13.5 24.7 3.4 1.1
Fill-in-the-blank 2.2 10.1 22.5 13.5 27.0 24.6
Essay 6.8 13.5 7.9 10.1 12.5 49.4
Source: Data from the Australian Bureau of Statistics, 2004.

Note: Hements medritl chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor
fr tmasfet refde.

Ig taf spob mesk scrad fouse ripadal. Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve First line in each
footnote is
twqlof scampor toc ab De gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor frervc indented. See
end of essay for
instructions on
how to do this.
1
For a useful comparison, see also David Smith, A National Framework for Improving the
Health of Minors (Canberra: Sage, 2012).
2
Ben James and Fred Johns, Bioethics and the Age of Reason (London, England: Walker
Press, 2009); James Green, ed. Dealing with Bioethics (Lismore, NSW: Abbey Press, 2011).
Use Ibid if you
3 are quoting from
For further helpful discussion, see Nancy Morgan, James Reid, and Susie Fox, "Every
Shoe Tells a Story," National Geographic 210, no. 2 (2007): 75. the same item as
4
Ibid., 78.
in the note above.

1
tmasfet crabnceop edpty brlaw.5 Taf spob mesk scrad fouse ripadal. Is tren

“vilye calmyn selmwe romew fer bfemnt.” 6 Ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop

retsop leqmte feot fropel chrterqTaf spob mesk scrad fouse ripadal.7 Ve twqlof

scampor toc ab zop retsop frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr tmasfet. 8

Crabnceop edpty brlaw repec fmgnjr dfhme pramter, vfrer be fheop gertwqo.

Sdemnt oltem ghjek snter, cvbn am troep9 fmgnjr dfhme pramter, vfrer

bgtecfer cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter, cvbn am troep be

fheop gertwqo,
A quote of 40
BiIg taf spob mesk scrad fouse ripadal. Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro
ve recd twqlof scampor toc ab zop. Retsop leqmte feot fropel chrterq words or more
repvbto de rox trwibme resvghor fr tmasfet anm. Svhnete eef sdemnt must be single
am troep fmgnjr dfhme pramter vfrer nber covlrest newtre sehmnve jkh spaced and
ewr jmner heorthe.10 indented with no
quotation
Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop marks.
rox.11 Lopsder trwibme resvghor for tmasfet crabnceop edpty brlaw repec.

Forrest and Phillips asserted, however, that “conditions can alter the whole

family dynamics”.12 Bgtecfer cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek ter

vbn am troep fmgnjr dfhme pramter vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo

sehmnve heorthe. Chrterq repvbto de gatlew.13

6. Morgan has
been quoted from
5
before. Only use
Veronica Jenkins, "Addicts of Compassion," Winnipeg Free Press, November 16, 2009.
surnames and
shorten the title.
6
Morgan, Reid, and Fox, 80.
7
Terrance Martin Jr., Instant Management: The Best Ideas (New York: William Morrow,
2010), 34-35.
8
Daron Gray, "Ballooning," in Celebrate Children, ed. David Goodwin (Albury, NSW:
Kidsreach, 1999); Arlene Zeuss, "Time Travel," Journal of Physical Activity 56, no. 2 (2001); 7. Only use Jr., (or
Arlene Zeuss, "Perspectives on Time," Journal of Astronomy 34, (2007). any other title)
9
Arlene Zeuss, "Elusive Journeys," Journal of Action 34, no. 4 (February 2001), under after a full name.
“Reach for the Stars,” accessed December 2, 2012, http://www.journalsonline.com . If you used this
10
Robert Smith and Peter Regent, "Major Talking Point: Days Are Over," Nursing Standard item again, the
25, no. 39 (2013):7-8, accessed June 3, 2012, http://www.daisydays.org .
note would have
11
Emily White, Jeremy Coombs, and Victor Jenner, "Clinical Challenges for the just Martin, ….
Inexperienced," Australian Family Physician 24, no. 6 (2013): 29.
12
Paul Forrest and Daisy Phillips, eds., Inclusion in Action, 3rd ed. (Melbourne, VIC: Leed, 13. Journal
2012), 345-52.
13
article quoted in
Jane Brown, “The Jewish Problem,” Religions of the World (March 2009): 56, quoted in a book.
John Durban, Outlines of Religion (Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press, 2005), 271-3.

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Level 1 Heading

Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop

leqmte feot fropel chrterq rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr tmasfet crabnceop
Most assignments
edpty brlaw epec. Epramter vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo sehmnve
will have no more
heorthe. Chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr than one or two
level headings,
tmasfet crabnceop edpty brlaw. but some may
have more.

Level 2 Heading Insert 3 line


spaces above
Is tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop each heading.
leqmte feot fropel chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme

resvghor fr tmasfet crabnceop edpty brlaw epec.

Cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt ov lopsder trwibme resvghor fr

gertwqo sehmnve heorthe.14 Vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo fment svhnete

Bgtecfer cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn am troeptr

fmgnjr dfhme pramter.15 Vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo sehmnve heorthe.

nber covlrest fheop gertwqo fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn

am troep.16 Cvbn am troep repvbto de gatlew frcbne chrterq repvbto de gatlew

frcbne rox lopsder trwibme.17

Fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn am troeptr fmgnjr

dfhme cvbn am troep repvbto de gatlew frcbne lkjhe klj.18 Oltem ghjek snter

cvbn am troep repvbto de gatlew frcbne.19 16. eBook with


no page
numbers.
14
Cooperative Office of Dawah in Rawdah, “Evidence Islam is Truth,” The Religion of Islam,
accessed April 22, 2012, http://www.islamreligion.com. 18. Avoid using
15 Ibid if it will be
Jonathan E. Brockropp, "Islam and Bioethics," Journal of Religious Ethics 36, no. 1
(March, 2008), under “Marriage,” accessed May 23, 2012, http://onlinelibary.wiley.com. at the top of the
16
Verna Benner Carson and Harold G. Koenig, Spiritual Dimensions of Nursing Practice,
list of footntes
(Radnor: Templeton Press, 2009), under “Prayer,” accessed December 2, 2012, on a page.
http://avondale.eblib.com.au/patron/FullRecord.aspx?p.2088734.
17
Queensland Dairy Authority, Food for the Masses, 3rd ed. (Brisbane: Queensland Dairy 19. Titles of 4
Authority, 2000), 231-5. words or less are
18
Ibid., 28. not shortened.
19
James and Johns, 56-58.

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Level 3 Heading

Svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn am troep fmgnjr dfhme

pramter vfrer nber covlrest fheop (see fig. 1).20 Pramter vfrer nber covlrest.

Bgtecfer cdelok fment svhnete eef sdemnt oltem ghjek snter cvbn am troeptr

fmgnjr dfhme pramter. Vfrer nber covlrest fheop gertwqo sehmnve heorthe.

Include tables
and figures in
the body of the
essay.

Figure 1. Bill Rogers, “Examples of a Paradox,” Encyclopedia of Speech (2001), vol.3, plate 21.

Level 1 Heading

Tren vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop

leqmte feot fropel chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme

resvghor fr tmasfe uer, ca crabnceop edpty brlaw epec.

Conclusion

Vilye calmyn selmwe ro ve twqlof scampor toc ab zop retsop leqmte

hements medritl chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme

resvghor fr tmasfet refde crabnceop edpty brlaw epec. Gatlew frcbne rox

lopsder trwibme resvghor fr tmasfevc polewm edpty brlaw.

Evans has four or


20 more authors. Cite
Further excellent examples illustrating the principles of paradox may be found in Justin
Evans et al., Parallels and Paradoxes (Chicago: Universal Press, 2009). as Evans et. al.,

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Appendix

Chrterq repvbto de gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr tmasfet refde
crabnceop edpty brlaw epec. Gatlew frcbne rox lopsder trwibme resvghor fr
tmasfevc polewm edpty brlaw.

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Reference List Item type

Journal article quoted


Brown, Jane. “The Jewish Problem.” Religions of the World (March 2009): in a book.
56. Quoted in John Durban, Outlines of Religion. Cambridge, MA:
Harvard University Press, 2005.

Cooperative Office of Dawah in Rawdah. “Evidence Islam is Truth.” The Website


Religion of Islam. Accessed April 22, 2012.
http://www.islamreligion.com.

Brockropp, Jonathan E. "Islam and Bioethics." Journal of Religious Ethics Online journal article
36, no. 1 (March, 2008). Accessed June 23, 2012.
http://onlinelibary.wiley.com

Carson, Verna Benner, and Harold G. Koenig. Spiritual Dimensions of Electronic book with
Nursing Practice. Radnor, PA: Templeton Press, 2009. EBL no page numbers
e-book.

Evans, Justin, Kane Poster, Ed Koch, Merril C. Tenney, and Margaret Book - list all authors.
Jacob. Parallels and Paradoxes. Chicago: Universal Press, 2009.
Edited book with two
Forrest, Paul, and Daisy Phillips, eds. Inclusion in Action. Melbourne, VIC:
editors
Leed, 2012.
Chapter from an
Gray, Daron. "Ballooning." In Celebrate Children, edited by David edited book.
Goodwin, 223-5. Albury, NSW: Kidsreach, 1999.

Green, James, ed. Dealing with Bioethics. Lismore, NSW: Abbey Press, Edited book
2011.

James, Ben, and Fred Johns. Bioethics and the Age of Reason. London, Book by two authors.
England: Walker Press, 2009.
Newspaper article.
Jenkins, Veronica. "Addicted to Compassion." Winnipeg Free Press,
November 16, 2009.

Martin Jr., Terrance. Instant Management: The Best Ideas. New York: Book.
William Morrow, 2010.

Morgan, Nancy, James Reid, and Susie Fox. "Every Shoe Tells a Story." Journal article with
National Geographic 210, no. 2 (2007): 75-84. three authors.

Book with corporate


Queensland Dairy Authority. Food for the Masses. 3rd ed. Brisbane: author
Queensland Dairy Authority, 2000.

Smith, David. A National Framework for Improving the Health of Minors. Book
Canberra: Sage, 2012.

Smith, Robert, and Peter Regent. "Major Talking Point: Days are Over." Online journal article
Nursing Standard 25, no. 39 (2013): 351-61. Accessed May 5, with two authors.
2012. http://www.daisydays.org.
Journal article with 3
White, Emily, Jeremy Coombs, and Victor Jenner. "Clinical Challenges for authors
the Inexperienced." Australian Family Physician 24, no. 6 (2013):2.

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Item type

Zeuss, Arlene. "Elusive Journeys." Journal of Action 34, no. 4 (February


Online Journal article.
2001). Accessed June 27, 2012. http://www.journalsonline.com

———. "Time Travel." Journal of Physical Activity 56, no. 2 (2001): 32-38. Journal article.

———. "Perspectives on Time." Journal of Astronomy 34, (2007): 9-15. Journal article, no
issue number.

Use ‘ctrl alt –‘ (minus)


to replace name of
author if it is the same
as the one above.

Annotated Bibliography

If you are asked for an annotated bibliography, follow these rules.

If your annotation is a brief phrase, add it in brackets after the record:


Note the lack of
Smith, David. A National Framework for Improving the Health of Minors. punctuation in the
Canberra: Sage, 2012. annotation
[a brief summary of regulations]

If your annotation is a complete sentence use paragraph indentation:

Smith, David. A National Framework for Improving the Health of Minors.


Canberra: Sage, 2012.
This framework is important as it outlines the importance of health care for all
minors.

Note. References in this essay are examples only and are not authentic. Material for
this sample essay has been based on the Turabian style guide:

Turabian, Kate L., Wayne C. Booth, Gregory G. Colomb, and Joseph M. Williams. A
Manual for Writers of Research Papers, Theses, and Dissertations: Chicago
Style for Students and Researchers, 8th ed. Chicago: University of Chicago
Press, 2013.

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Footnotes

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paragraph settings below:

Reference list

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a hanging indent and double space between entries.

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