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Assessment 1
Abstract
This report aims to evaluate, improve and provide recommendations of a Stage 5, Year 9
English Unit 'Introduction to Shakespeare'. This unit was originally designed to aim for a low
to average ability class at Liverpool Girls High school. This report aims to improve the unit
by providing recommendations to suit a class with Gifted and Talented students. In order to
achieve this, the unit has been reconstructed through the use of Understanding by Design
(UbD) framework to ensure the success in academic achievements of students. There are
areas that are specifically targeted for improvement such as literary, numeracy and the
personal and social capabilities of students.
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Table of Contents
Executive Summary…………………………………………………………………. 3
Goals………………………………………………………………………………..3
Recommendations………………………………………………………………….3
Background Information…………………………………………………………….4
Comparative Table…………………………………………………………………...5
Recommendation Report.............................................................................................7
Reconstructed Unit..................................................................................................... 9
Concept Map............................................................................................................ 10
Assessment Task.................................................................................................... 11
Redesigned Unit....................................................................................................... 10
References............................................................................................................... 20
Appendix ................................................................................................................ 22
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Executive Summary
Objective and Context
This report has been aimed to be presented to the English faculty at Liverpool Girls High
School, located in Greater Western Sydney. The philosophy at Liverpool Girls High School
is that of a 'school community committed to achieving set goals' (My School, 2017). The
school is a multicultural single-sex education with the population of 937 students as of 2017
(My School, 2017). The population of students is greatly diverse, with 88% of students that
come from a language background other than English. Although, only 1% of the population
identify as Indigenous students. The socio-educational advantage value of the school is 933
with 57% of parents in the bottom quarter. The attendance rate of students in the school is
87% which has gone down 2% since the previous year (My School, 2017).
The school's NAPLAN results illustrate concerns for numeracy as students in year 9 were
substantially below similar school and all school score. Whereas in literacy, both year 7 and
year 9 students are substantially above the score in similar school and all school scores in
writing and spelling.
Goals
List of Recommendations
The following is a list of recommendations being suggested to approach and achieve the
goals outlined above.
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Background Information
The unit 'Introduction to Shakespeare' was taught to a year 9 class with majority of the
students being from a language background other than English. There were two students that
needed a support teacher in the class with them. The rest of the students ranged from low to
average ability. The unit of work provided to teach this class was very basic and did not
provide any guidelines or support the learning of the students.
Furthermore, the classroom lacked resources such as the smartboard and often the projector
would not work. This left little use of technology that may have improved the engagement
and learning of these students.
Comparative Table
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Many activities Need to build Explicit teaching and McCollin, O'Shea &
that build on engage with modeling for McQuiston (2009)
Literacy student's vocabulary more students can guide discuss the
writing skills especially since it is students to clearer importance of
highly relevant to meaning. closing the gap of
the subject of Increase the poor
shakespeare comprehension vocabularies of
where appropriate students from
as it exposes cultural diverse
students to a wide background.
range of vocabulary
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Contrust a scope
and sequence,
concept map and
the assessment
task.
Recommendations
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The reconstruction of this unit of work is designed to improve the Stage 5 'Introduction to
Shakespeare' English unit by meeting the needs and capabilities of diverse students. The
recommendations provided are to ensure an inquiry-based approach to teaching and learning
by implementing the Understanding by Design framework.
The original unit outline contained limited information on how this unit would be structured
to fit for a diverse classroom, engage students and develop their skills. It did not contain
scope and sequence, concept map and assessment task. With these not included, it raises
concern of how many teachers are not provided with these important documents. Scope and
Sequence is significant for teachers and students alike as it provides the correct direction and
clarification. The scope and sequenced was constructed to ensure all teachers are on right
path and to provide the appropriate flow of topics. The sequence of topics are constructed to
ensure effective learning throughout the year. The reconstruction of the unit was achieved
through incorporating the Understanding by Design (UbD) framework, an approach of
designing the curriculum backwards from the assessment task, by focusing on 'teaching and
assessing for understanding and learning transfer' (McTighe & Wiggins, 2012, p. 1).
Incorporating the framework in the planning of the unit outline, ensures that students will
have gained the skills to achieve appropriate outcomes for the assessment tasks. Informal
assessments inform teachers of their student's abilities thus incorporated in the unit outline
using the UbD framework. Peter, Harlow, Scott, McKie, Johnson, Moffatt and McKim
(2014) discuss the importance of threshold concepts as it assists students to learn new
concepts in their subject, and provides them with opportunity to raise new questions of the
ideas present in their learning. In particular, in the English subject where skills like analysing
and evaluating the meaning between a composer and their text, the impact of language and
understanding the relevance of a student's own world are all activities that are included in the
unit outline and comparative table.
This unit outline is reconstructed to meet the needs of gifted and talented students; however it
is not limited to these students. All students may benefit from extension activities and
relevant tasks. Inquiry-based learning is used throughout the unit of outline through giving
students the choice and opportunity to take control of their learning. Gifted and talented
students are provided with choices and options for their learning. This allows the student to
be challenged by their own choosing and provides them with the opportunity to further their
achievement (Reid, 2015). When you provide a student to make their own choice within the
appropriate framework, it ensures that their learning is meaningful, effective and relevant
(Iverson, Pedersen, Krogh & Jensen, 2011). This approach has been incorporated throughout
the unit of work, enabling students to take control of their task and therefore, it ensure their
interest and they can make connections with their own world. Such activities are to choose
from directing a scene from their own choice of play and allowing the students the option of
modern adaptation if they choose. These tasks allow students to achieve the appropriate
academic outcomes and threshold concepts like producing different effects of text in a
creative way. Group work allows students to mix witithin the classroom, ensuring mixed
abilitties to interact and offer their opinions and it also allows the development of personal
social capabilities.
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To successfully reconstruct this unit of outline, numeracy needed to be applied. During the
learning of the Iambic Pentameter, numeracy was applied as students learnt about the rhythm
that Shakespeare used in his plays which is significant to his writing. Students explored the
iambic pentameter while also collaborating and allowing for creativity to take place. Due to
the basic nature of the unit provided and with limited resources, the reconstruction followed
the UbD framework to improve the program to effectively achieve student outcomes. The
aim was to provide differentiation for gifted and talented students and fit the unit of work so
it is suitable for a classroom where these students are present.
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Reconstructed Unit
Texts: Picture Books, Texts: Drama Texts: Fiction Texts: Film and Drama
Comic and Images
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Concept Map
Context
Globe Theatre
Plays Writing
Themes
Introduction to
Shakespeare
Macbeth Characterisation
Romeo and Juliet
Globe Theatre
Hamlet
Tragedy
Techniques
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You will select a focus area from the provided list and with a small group research the topic.
Each student in the group will need to deliver a 2-3 minute speech. The speeches should
be delivered consecutively. Regardless of your area of research, you must include the legacy
of Shakespeare and the context of Elizabethan world.
You may create a visual backdrop (Powerpoint, etc.) to add interest to your speech and speak
about the images. However, the visual will not be marked as part of your presentation.
Shakespeare’s Life – his life experiences from childhood to death – including parentage,
marriage, children, where he lived, who he worked with, his fame – during his lifetime and
beyond
Theatre in Elizabethan Times – focus on The Globe, performances in private venues for the
rich, other theatres in competition with The Globe, audiences, the experience of being at the
theatre during this era
Life in Elizabethan England – including rituals of marriage, city vs rural life, occupations,
entertainment (other than the theatre), living conditions for the rich vs the common folk, life
expectancy
Shakespeare’s History Plays – where he got his inspiration, common features, synopsis of
some plays, interesting facts – were they accurate representations of ‘history’, descriptions of
modern productions – including film
Shakespeare’s Tragedies - where he got his inspiration, common features, synopsis of some
plays, interesting facts, descriptions of modern productions – including film
Stratford –Upon-Avon – (Shakespeare’s birthplace) what tourist attractions can you find in
this town today, a tour guide of places to see and landmarks to visit on a pilgrimage tour
based on Shakespeare
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Outstanding High standard of Sound standard of Basic research and Limited research and
research and research and research and information is information is
skillful careful consideration of included into the included into the
consideration of consideration of information is speech speech
information is information is included and
included and included and attempts to
integrated into the integrated into the integrated into the
speech speech speech
Outstanding use of High use of Sound use of Basic use of Limited or no use
techniques that techniques and techniques and techniques and of techniques that
and language language devices language devices language devices and language
devices that are that are commonly that are commonly that are commonly devices that are
commonly found found in speeches found in speeches found in speeches commonly found
in speeches and is and is appropriate and is appropriate and is appropriate in speeches.
appropriate to audience and to audience and to audience and
to audience and purpose. purpose. purpose.
purpose.
Outstanding use of High use of eye- Sound use of eye- Basic use of eye- Limited or no use
eye-contact, hand contact, hand contact, hand contact, hand of eye-contact,
gestures and tone gestures and tone gestures and tone gestures and tone of hand gestures and
of voice that of voice that of voice that voice that appeals tone of voice that
appeals and appeals and appeals and and engages the appeals and
engages the engages the engages the audience engages the
audience audience audience. audience.
Comment: ________________________________________________________________________________
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TOTAL: /20
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Redesigned Unit Outline- Key: The orange colour and bold text are the changes made.
Summary Duration
This unit will introduce students to William Shakespeare. They will explore what it was like to live during the 6 weeks
Elizabethan Era as well as immerse themselves in Shakespearean plays and language. Students will read excerpts from
a variety of plays and familiarise themselves with characters, themes and language techniques that were used by
Shakespeare.
› EN5-4B effectively transfers knowledge, skills and understanding of language concepts into new and
different contexts
› EN5-5C thinks imaginatively, creatively, interpretively and critically about information and increasingly
complex ideas and arguments to respond to and compose texts in a range of contexts.
› EN5-7D understands and evaluates the diverse ways texts can represent personal and public
worlds
A selection of plays
or excerpts.
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Differentiated Teaching:
Teacher selects one key scene to read aloud. While Students are placed in different groups. They
analyse and reading the key scene, the teacher demonstrates analyse the key scene chosen by the group.
explain how text how to analyse the language features, characters
structures, and themes. Extension: Using the PEEL paragraph, students
language features write an extended response on how a directior
and visual features In groups of four or five, students read their own would represent this scene. Students should use
of texts and the scene from the play and analyse the key scene as ICT to assist them with this response. They may
context in which demonstrated by the teacher. present the information using a multimodel
texts are mode.
experienced may
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influence audience
response (ACELT1641)
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Briggs, S. (2014). How to make learning relevant to your students (And why it’s crucial to their success).
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Huh, K. (2016). Visual Thinking Strategies and Creativity in English Education. Indian Journal of Science and
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Iversen, A., Pedersen, A. S., Krogh, L., Jensen, A. (2015). Learning, Leading and Letting Go of Control. SAGE
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McTighe, J., & Wiggins, G. (2012). Understanding by Design Framework. Retrieved from
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Michelle McCollin, Doris J. O'Shea & Kathleen McQuiston (2009) Improving Vocabulary and Comprehension
Skills of Secondary-Level Students from Diverse Backgrounds, Preventing School Failure: Alternative
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Peter, M., Harlow, A., Scott, J., McKie, D., Johnson, M., Moffat, M., & McKim, A. (2014). Threshold conepts:
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Appendices
Original Unit Outline of Liverpool Girls High School Key: BOLD for aspects taught
Year 9 Introducing Mr Shakespeare l Stage 5 l English
Summary Duration
This unit will introduce students to William Shakespeare. They will explore what it was like to live during the 10 weeks.
Elizabethan Era as well as immerse themselves in Shakespearean plays and language. Students will read excerpts from
a variety of plays and familiarise themselves with characters, themes and language techniques that were used by
Shakespeare. They will also participate in the annual Shakespeare Day hosted during term 3.
› EN5-3B selects and uses language forms, features and structures of texts appropriate to a range of
purposes, audiences and contexts, describing and explaining their effects on meaning
› EN5-4B effectively transfers knowledge, skills and understanding of language concepts into new and
different contexts
› EN5-5C thinks imaginatively, creatively, interpretively and critically about information and increasingly
complex ideas and arguments to respond to and compose texts in a range of contexts.
Stage 5 -
Outcome 2
Stage 5 -
Outcome 2
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Stage 5 -
Outcome 3
use organisation
patterns, voice and
language
conventions to
present a point of
view on a subject,
speaking clearly,
coherently and
with effect, using
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logic, imagery and
rhetorical devices
to engage
audiences
(ACELY1813)
Stage 5 -
Outcome 7
respond to and
compose sustained
imaginative,
creative and
critical texts that
represent aspects
of their expanding
personal and
public worlds, for a
wide range of
purposes, including
for enjoyment and
pleasure
Stage 5 -
Outcome 2
use
comprehension
strategies to
compare and
contrast
information within
and between texts,
identifying and
analysing
embedded
perspectives, and
evaluating
supporting
evidence (ACELY1744,
ACELY1754)
Stage 5 -
Outcome 4
creatively
transform a range
of different types
of texts, including
their own, into
new imaginative
texts,
experimenting with
patterns,
representations,
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intertextuality and
appropriations
Stage 5 -
Outcome 2
understand and
apply a wide range
of reading
strategies to
enhance
comprehension
and learning for a
range of print,
multimodal and
digital texts
Stage 5 -
Outcome 3
analyse and
explain how text
structures,
language features
and visual features
of texts and the
context in which
texts are
experienced may
influence audience
response (ACELT1641)
use interaction
skills to present
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and discuss an
idea and to
influence and
engage an
audience by
selecting
persuasive
language, varying
voice tone, pitch,
and pace, and
using elements
such as music and
sound effects
(ACELY1811)
Stage 5 -
Outcome 5
respond to and
compose texts that
use inference and
figurative
language, eg
symbolism and
allusion, in
complex and
subtle ways