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Cinemas: The condition ofthe cincenss craie/s}a ud {impression on anyone visitng our towns, ‘Theatres and concert halls: These offer book resident and fowrist a wise variety of plays and concerts but may overseas visitors donot attend shows because of the high prices of ees. ‘Resammmndlations: One suggestion is for some original versian films to be shown particularly for te benefit of English-speaking tourists, The other recommends discounts ‘on theatre and cancert tickers for the many souong pecple > come here 10 study, 5a recommend + slicild + infinitive without to saanest + gerumel b Possible answers ‘create a bad impression on anyone visiting onr town there is not much ehotce in terms af ‘we are fortunate enough to have offer... a wide variety of visitors comment of particularly for the benefit.of The aim of this report is to descttbe what our town ollers vistors in terms of parks and gardens. It als ‘makes recommendations for improving these facilities In onder to encourage more people to visit the town. arks This town has an excess of 70,000 habitants, but there are only two quite large parks where people ean un and play. in addition, only cae of the parks “The Queen's Park’. has sports facilities, for example foothall pitch oF tennis court. Moreover, bath parks, The ‘Queen's Park’ and “The North's Park, are both in the orth of the town, the south only has a small park. Gardens ‘There are some seal parks with flowers and trees that they are good for siting and eating lunch if you are a worker. However, there is nothing, in the town centre, ‘where many people are, inchading business people and Aourstn, Recommendations 1 suggest puting sports facilities tm “The Nurth’s Park’ ‘and make another park i the south, Halse recomend to have a garden with flowers in the town centre where! the pespile could enjoy and eat their lunch, Richard 191 words Answer key ‘Examiner's comment ‘Content: The report starts weil with 2 clear introduction. However, there is little mention made of vistiors. The ‘candidate aims the report at people in general, workers and only briefly mentions tourists. Organization: The report is clearly divided into appropriate sections. Linking devices are used effectively, e.g im onder to. Papers Language: Some ankward use of language. e.g. there are nly two quite small parks, botk parks... are Bork. There are also some basic errors .g. misuse of ponsessive x, ‘the Morth's Perk, probicns with werunds F suggest mals (making), recommend to have (having), omission of reflexive Pronoun people could enjoy (themsetves). usc of double subject, shar they are good. Some errors with word formation and spciting. but these do not distract the reader. e.g, ‘habiamts, putters. Suitable use of vocabulary for the task, <6 elm, facilis, football pach, tennis coat. Some use- more complex structures, ©. alio makes recommendations for insproving in ord ro encourage more pepe 10 visit sggest putting, but in general the Language is very siecle Marke Pass Review 4. Pages 56-57 Reading and Use of English: Transformations 4 soon asthe meeting had not to tke hin on 2 the time we got to ‘5 not take/havelshow much 3 leave nil he (had) put ieee 4 never read such a funny Correcting mistakes 2 port. As for a 4 ad came, ene 3 much, the 3 took to your advice, a Vocabulary: Cinema Least 2role Secrities, reviews plot Scene ‘Reading and Use of English: Word formation 1 to attract mew shudlenis to the Storytime Schoo! of Storytelling 2 Vimierested librarians confidence 4 creativity Siascinating performances 7 surprisingly Unit 5 Doing what you have to Reading and Use of English I: Multiple matching Pages 58-59 2 1 © According 10 the headteacher, fn bscy shoot plerings resent a very real risk of accidents. | can't ee why 2A They die ws drink waser im the elassrom ithe, Cito fetle ent of te IE

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