Name of Corrections/Suggestions
Panel
Mr. Statement of the Problem
Supremo
- Reflect Statement of the
problem to the
conceptual framework
- Put “Participants” first
Conceptual Framework
- Rearrange Conceptual
Framework
Definition of Terms
- Improve Operational
Definition
Mr. Title Page
Oducado
- Change “Parenting
Competence and Sense
of Satisfaction of
Visually Impaired
persons in Iloilo City”
RRL
- Too lengthy
Definition of Terms
- Change “Competence”
to “Parenting
Competence”
- Alphabetical Order
Actions Done Page number
- Organized Placement of pp. 7
variables to reflect
Statement of the problem
- Placed Participants first pp. 9
pp. 7
- Reorganized variables of
Competency by itemizing
Self Efficacy and
Satisfaction under
“Competency”
- Reworded Operational pp. 9
Definitions
- Changed to “Parenting Front page
Sense of Competence of
Visually Impaired Persons
in Iloilo City”
- Synthesized and Shortened pp. 2
RRL
- Changed to “Parenting
Competence” and pp. 9
rearranged in alphabetical
order
Distribution of Participants
- Reflect “Low, Average,
and High Income” in the - Reflected to Definition of pp. 9
definition of terms under terms
Family Income

Research Locale
- Change to past tense - Changed to Past tense
pp. 12
Statement of the Problem - Described under pp. 33
- Describe SOP 1,2,6,7 Conclusion
under Conclusion