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Megan Antill
Professor Calhoun
ENG 1201.539
17 March 2019
My essay will attempt to answer the question of whether or not starting school at a later
time, such as 8:30 a.m., instead of 7:30 a.m., will impact students positively. This will include
small details such as the impact on grades, mental health, physical health, and overall motivation
Ayres, Crystal. “19 Should School Start Later in the Morning Pros and Cons.” Vittana.org,
vittana.org/19-should-school-start-later-in-the-morning-pros-and-cons.
In this article, “19 Should School Start Later in the Morning Pros and Cons”, Crystal
Ayres, lists the pros and cons of starting school at a later time. While I mainly focused on the
pros I found that when looking at the cons majority of them say that the cons are cons for people
other than the students. The students themselves had only two cons.
The writer’s purpose in writing this article was to provide both sides of this argument.
When you have the full story it is easier to make a decision of whether or not you are for or
against school starting at a later time. The audience is students and school officials who would be
The writer, Crystal Ayres, is a web content manager. I find the author to be credible after
reading other articles of hers. The article was unbiased and did not include her personal opinions.
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Only facts were given in this article. The source matches other sources as well, making it appear
to be credible.
I will be using both the pros and cons listed in this article. Due to the fact that majority of
the cons are not harmful towards the students, this information further proves my point. I will be
using the pro, It could boost individual academic performance, as well in my paper.
Clark, Michael D. “Should Schools Be Starting Later in the Morning? Some Southwest Ohio
www.daytondailynews.com/news/local-education/should-schools-starting-later-the-morn
ng-some-souhwest-ohio-districts-have-made-changes/r6QkJaHLVEnW5bf445E70N/.
In this article, Michael D. Clark provides specific examples of current schools dealing
with the issue of later start times. Most of which are taking place in different countys around
Ohio. It appears the main solution to this issue is to push back the start time by 30 minutes.
Another main point made by Clark is that the issue of sleep deprivation goes past mental health.
It also can cause young minds to make more consistent and spontaneous impulsive decisions.
Clark includes quotes from students attending school, which are all wrapped around the idea that
the students do not dislike school, just the early morning that accompanies it.
The author’s purpose in writing this article is to inform those who have not taken the step
to push the start time back, why they should. I believe the audience for this piece is school
officials and students who share opinions with the students questioned in the article. The fact that
the article was written at the beginning of 2019 is relevant, due to the fact that the information is
current.
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The writer is a staff writer for Dayton Daily News. He is a credible author, seeing as he
has written multiple pieces concerning this topic all of which fit with other data I have seen from
other sources outside of Dayton Daily News. The source is a reliable one due to its credibility
I have decided to use the information within each county as an example of schools that
pushed back their start times. Furthermore, alone with these examples, there are specific reasons
why the start times were pushed back. I believe this information will be useful in writing my
Malatesta, Elizabeth. “Let Them Sleep? Later School Start Times Improve Graduation and
times/.
This article written by, Elizabeth Malatesta, provides biological examples on why the
start time of school needs to be pushed back. Specific statistics on teenagers are provided and
compared with the actuality of these statistics in real life. Attendance of students before the start
time changes and after the start time changes is also analyzed.
The purpose of the article is to inform that insufficient sleep in teens has lead to an
increase in car accidents, substance abuse, suicide attempts, depression, and even criminal
activity. The audience for this article is everyone who is affected by the school start times. These
The writer is currently a 2018 Fulbright U.S. Student Finalist. She has written multiple
articles on this topic. I find her information to be credible because the information she provides
matches with information other sources on this topic have also provided.
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I will be using the information on how student’s daily lives were altered when the start
time was pushed back. The information on decreases in car crashes, substance abuse, suicide
Meredith, Karenna. “Health Officials Say Lack of Sleep Can Negatively Affect Students'
universe.byu.edu/2016/09/06/health-officials-say-lack-of-sleep-can-negatively-affect-st
dents-grades/.
In this article, Karenna Meredith’s main points revolve around what lack of sleep can do
to the brain of a young person. She analyzes other articles on this topic and uses them to back the
information she is providing. One main point she gives is that sleep issues can cause grade point
The writer’s purpose is to prevent lack of sleep to get to the point where it is affecting
students grades. Therefore, I would identify the audience as students and school officials who
Karenna Meredith has written many articles on controversial topics. In order to have the
information to write on such topics she would have to have the proper amount of research from
multiple different topics. Making this source credible. Despite the fact that the article was written
in December of 2016, the information provided is still relevant and useful at this point in time.
The way lack of sleep affects grades has not changed since then.
I will be using this information to prove that lack of sleep does have a direct correlation
to grade averages. I will also be using it to dive into the mental effects of lack of sleep.
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“Schools Start Too Early | Features | CDC.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention,
Centers
The article, “Schools Start Too Early”, written by an writer for cdc.gov explains the
effects of sleep on adolescents. By describing some of the events that occur when kids reach
The purpose in writing this article is to inform those who attend school, as teachers or
students, the negative side effects of not getting the proper amount of sleep. The audience being
those teachers and students. The article was last revised in July of 2018, therefore, the
This source is credible because the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is a
credible resource. I will be using the information on how sleep affects adolescents in my paper.
Urton, James. “Teens Get More Sleep, Show Improved Grades and Attendance with Later
www.washington.edu/news/2018/12/12/high-school-start-times-study/.
In this article, James Urton goes into the medical and social side of school starting later.
Wrist monitors were a main point in this article. They were used to figure out if students were
actually getting more sleep each night, and they were. The wake-up time for students on
weekdays and weekends moved closer together, making for more healthy sleeping habits.
Research from multiple credible companies is also provided making the article that much more
persuasive.
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The writer’s purpose is to convince the audience that later start times for schools is better
for the students than the current, original start time. The audience being school officials and
Urton is a writer for the University of Washington’s online news. After going through
some of the other articles he has written I have found him to provide credible, resourceful
information.
I will be using the information on the wrist monitors in my paper. I found that this is the
information that really is unbreakable, the numbers do not lie. The points provided by school
officials on the student’s behavior and overall mood will also be included in the paper. The
answer of whether or not grades are impacted by more sleep was also answered in this article. I
Wahlstrom, Kyla L. “Later Start Time for Teens Improves Grades, Mood, and Safety.” \
In this article, Kyla Wahlstrom goes into lengthy detail on the effects on students of
school starting later. One of the overall main changes in students when school started later, is
that there are significantly less reports of absences, tardiness, and sleepiness in school. An
overall change in the moods of students was also reported by multiple school officials, from
I believe the author’s purpose in writing this article was to inform all people associated
with schools the benefits on a later start time. The audience for this piece is anyone who either
attends school as a student or attends school as a teacher, principal, or another type of school
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official. While the article was written in 2017, the information provided is still significant due to
the fact that most of the information provided has not changed in 2 years.
The author is a senior research fellow. This in itself proves her to be a credible author for
Kappan Online. I will be using the information in the article to show the benefits in the health of
students. The mental health and overall wellbeing of students is discussed in this article and this
will answer one of my main questions, how does later start times impact students health?