Reviewer: Keeandra Cummings

Classmate: Nicholas Foster

Educational Philosophical Statement Rubric (EPS Rubric)

Criterion Undocumente Minimal 1 Basic 2 Proficient 3 Advanced 4 Comments
d0 Unacceptabl Acceptable Acceptable Acceptable
Unacceptable e
Idea The statement Statement Statement Using Using sound I love how
Developme does not address expresses logically generally assumptions you use
nt = 3 the author’s the author’s develops the sound and grey
views about the views about author’s assumptions arguments, anatomy
purposes of the purposes views about and the quote to
education, of the purposes arguments, statement build on
guiding education, of education, based in logically your idea. I
like how
educational guiding guiding practical develops the
compare
principles, educational educational experience, author’s
doctors to
understanding of principles, principles, the views about teacher,
learning, and/or understandi understandin statement the purposes because not
the most ng of g of learning, logically of many
appropriate learning, and/or the develops the education, people
strategies for and/or the most author’s guiding think about
teaching. The most appropriate views about educational hoe
statement is appropriate strategies for the principles, teachers
incoherent or strategies teaching. purposes of understandi saves life as
extremely brief for teaching, However, the education, ng of well. How
or contains but is statement is guiding learning, you state
major logical ambiguous not always educational and/or the that as
inconsistencies. or not consistent principles, most future
connected. and/or understandi appropriate educator
convincing. ng of strategies will impact
students
learning, for teaching.
every day.
and/or the The
You did a
most statement great job on
appropriate includes the
strategies sound outlining of
for teaching. ethical or your paper I
psychologica just feel
l arguments like you can
and not just go into
practical more details
ones. on your
paper. You
had some
great points
just need a
little more
detailing.
Overall,
your
outlining
over your
 paper was
good.
Illustrativ No illustrative Supporting Examples in Supporting Specific The
e examples are examples support of examples examples examples
Example included. are points are from the from the you have in
s =2 inadequate relevant but writer’s writer’s your paper
or of unclear general or experience personal on good,
relevance. not based in are specific experience, but I think
experience. and academic you can add
more detail
pertinent. work, or
to your
field
example to
experience make the
illustrate reader
points in a pictures
vivid or what you
memorable are talking
way. about. For
Example,
when you
stated,
“working in
a local
school
district for
the past
four years.”
You can get
into more
detail about
personal
example of
how
relationship
created how
students
learn in
today’s
generations

Quality The statement The The The In addition Overall,

of is very difficult statement, statement is statement is to being your
Writing to read though understandab clear, well clear, well writing was
=2 because of its comprehensi le plus two of organized, organized, good and
style, usage, bl e, has the following: free from free from well put
mechanics, or obvious 1) organized, errors of errors of together it
organization. problems in 2) free from mechanics mechanics was easy to
read. I think
two of the errors of and usage, and usage,
you should
following mechanics and written and written
add more
areas: style, and usage, in an in an detail to
usage and 3) in an appropriate appropriate your
mechanics, appropriate academic academic paragraph
or style. style, the proved
organization. statement: more
1) has a example to
 single, make the
unifying readers
theme and more
2) is strongly exciting
suggestive about
of the reader your
writer’s paper. Your
paper was
voice.
very started
to point you
didn’t add
personal
experiences
.
Possibly include at least one more personal experience example in
your paper. Also be sure to address the revision comments noted to
help the ideas flow smoother and correct grammatical errors. The
Additiona paragraphs are organized with each of them discussing unique ideas
l
Comment
and, overall, your paper is good. But, again, if you add the Total: 7 / 12 pts
s recommended ideas in your paper such as stating your educational
philosophy, incorporating instructional methods and classroom
management techniques, I think it will enhance your paper even
greater.
Reviewee 03/08/201
: Nicholas Foster Date:
9
Evaluator 03/08/201
: Keeandra Cummings Date:
9