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Montage of messages and dates being crossed out.

FADE IN:

EXT: PARK -DAY

Close up of Becky walking.

FABIAN

(confident)

Becky?

Camera cuts to a wide tracking of Becky walking into the park and looking around
then cuts to Close up of her face of realisation. Camera then cuts to a tracking as
she goes to sit down on the bench.

Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to he.
BECKY
(Shocked)

…UHM So, you look a bit…

FABIAN
Different?

BECKY
(Feeing awkward don’t know what to say)
Well Yeah

FABIAN
(Confident, but with a hint of cheekiness. Protagonists takes of glasses as he says
the line)
Ah, yeah, I wasn’t wearing glasses in my pics

Awkward silence high angle shot.

Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her.
FABIAN

As it happens you’re more beautiful than your pics


BECKY
(looking flattered)
Er..ha..er. thanks…

Fabian
And you’re even a rock climber?
Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me.

BECKY
Yeah I wanted to meet someone to climb with
Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her.

FABIAN
I loved it

BECKY
(Nervous and worried.)
Oh you don’t mean

FABIAN
(Sad)
Yeah

Awkward silence high angle.

The camera follows the dater, tracking downwards, looking at the protagonist’s leg.

Low angle of leg. Leg twitches. Movement.

Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her looking at
leg.

Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me looking at leg.

Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her looking at
leg.

Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me looking at leg.

Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me.

FABIAN
(Sarcastic shock)
OH MY GOD, IT’S A MIRACLE! (pause) Ah, no, just kidding...
No accident, I was born a legend. Don’t panic, I can really feel everything down
there, if you get what I mean.

Becky
(Looks a little embarrassed)
Tracking on the phone.

FABIAN
Excuse me, I have got take this.
FABIAN
Hey, yeah… it’s going well yeah … she’s hot I would rate her a 10 for sure yeah …
will do yeah alright ...bye mum

Tracking me coming back in to shot.

Fabian returns.

Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me.

Fabian
Ah amazing, you stayed, I was worried you might…
(nods head to the right)
Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her.

Becky
Really? Ok well I’ll admit once I saw you weren’t exactly the guy in your pics,(flexes
her muscles) I did worry about your honesty a bit. I thought I was going to have to
call my mate and make something up to get out of here

Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me.


FABIAN
Yeah, I know what you mean I usually say I have to go to bathroom and climb out
the window

Anyway, I know a really good bar down the road, do you fancy a drink?
Mind shot camera on the right of Becky as if someone is set next to her.

Becky
Yeah you know what, a drink would be great. I’ll give you a shout if you like.
Mind shot camera on the right of me as if someone is set next to me.

Fabian
Great, thanks.

Fabian
Don’t forget, I can only have one drink since I’m driving!
Mind shot going into a wide tracking the two both smile and leave.

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