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To: "Eystein Jansen" <eystein.jansen@geo.uib.no>
Subject: Re: AR4 Final Input Please check this mail
Date: Sat, 3 Mar 2007 18:14:19 -0700 (MST)
Cc: drind@giss.nasa.gov, "Bette Otto-Bliesner" <ottobli@ucar.edu>, "Fortunat Joos"
<joos@climate.unibe.ch>, Val�rie Masson-Delmotte <valerie.masson@cea.fr>, "Keith
Briffa" <k.briffa@uea.ac.uk>, "Tim Osborn" <t.osborn@uea.ac.uk>, "Jonathan
Overpeck" <jto@u.arizona.edu>, �yvind Paasche <oyvind.paasche@bjerknes.uib.no>
Dear all,
Bette
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Figures:
* Figure 6.4 and 6.7, Fortunat(?) should check the figures, legends, and
comments.
* Figure 6.8, Dick should check that the legend is revised correctly and
that color code in this figure is consist with text.
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Text 6.4:
* Page 6-11, line 37: the SOD has ~180 ppm and ~265 ppm. Is the change to
< intentional in response to a review comment?
* Page 6-15, lines 49-50: ... to the very different conditions at the LGM.
* Page 6-17, line 23: I am fine with Last Interglacial. Peck may also want
to comment. The SPM uses the last interglacial period.
* Page 6-17, line 41: ... warming over Eurasia and in the Baffin
Island/northern Greenland region ... I am OK with taking out "with sea
ice retreat" at the end of the sentence if that is awkward.
* Page 6-18, line 38: D-O is one of the abbreviations in the literature so
I am fine with this change. Need to be consistent and change Page 6-19,
line 49 to D-O.
* Page 6-21, line 12: Dick can advise if ICE-4G, ICE-5G, and VM2 are
acronyms.
* Page 6-21, line 20: Dick should be consulted to make sure sentence
meaning is OK with changes.
* Page 6-21, line 43: Dick can advise if J stands for Joseph.
* Page 6-21, line 51: Dick should be consulted on color code in Figure 6.8
and consistency with text.
* Page 6-22, line 2: Replace "longer" with "older". Valerie please comment
if this is a more correct wording. Note that neither Landais et al., 2003
or Suwa et al., 2006 are currently in the reference list. Eystein/Peck,
please advise if it is possible to add new references. Valerie, could we
use Landais et al, 2006, which is already in the reference list, here?
* Page 6-22, line 16: Peck, can you comment "if sea level rise during the
LIG" is an OK edit.
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References:
NRC: OK
Taylor: OK
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FAQ 6.1 and 6.2 need to be revised to refer to the correct sections of
Chapter 6. Most of the references are incorrect and look to be based on an
old outline of the chapter.
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Appendix:
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Bette L. Otto-Bliesner
National Center for Atmospheric Research
1850 Table Mesa Drive
Boulder, Colorado 80305
Ph: 303-497-1723
Fax: 303-497-1348
Email: ottobli@ucar.edu