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Teaching Notes
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Introduction
Compass is a six-level English program for bilingual
primary schools. The Compass program includes five
interrelated modules for students.
Through its integrated English as a Foreign Language
and English Language Arts programs, Compass offers
a robust curriculum incorporating the rich authentic
content and scaffolded learning outcomes available
to English language learners in an immersive
English-speaking environment.
Compass topics are developed from big questions—life’s
essential questions—about students themselves, about
society and humankind, and about the natural world. In
each log, learners examine the same big questions from
different perspectives. These questions arouse curiosity
in the topics and encourage exploration, personalization,
explanation and elaboration.
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The objective of writing instruction is to help learners Teacher’s Guide for Writing Log
become effective, thoughtful writers. The Compass The Compass Writing Log Teacher’s Guide contains a
Writing Log gives students a practical, immediate variety of approaches and techniques to provide additional
application for the language they are learning. It reinforces support for students’ writing skills development.
their knowledge of vocabulary and grammar and enhances
Process Writing
skills development while fostering students’ creativity and
In Compass Writing Log, students follow a modified
self-expression.
six-stage process. First, they analyze a model text. Students
The Compass Writing Log develops literacy skills through
then enter the planning stage, using the RAFT writing
a hybrid approach that combines English Language Arts
technique, along with brainstorming, concept mapping
instruction with EFL support. Students will acquire a
and, at times, researching in order to focus and inform
sequential, scaffolded set of writing strategies based on the
their writing. After planning and organizing, students
US Common Core Standards for Writing. The Compass
commence the drafting/revising/editing stages. Then, they
Writing Log combines these standards—geared toward
present their final pieces of writing to their classmates.
native speakers of English—with extensive support in
This process instills a habit of planning, writing and
process writing for English language learners. This hybrid
revising, and ensures more thoughtful, organized work.
approach enables students to develop key writing skills
while learning to think critically, plan, write, edit and Model Texts
reflect on their writing. Students are guided to understand Each topic of Compass Writing Log begins with a model
and apply these writing strategies through dynamic, text that helps English language learners identify and
intuitive, age- and level-appropriate activities. understand the featured genre, format and writing strategy
while engaging them in the topic. Model texts facilitate
Compass Writing Log aligns to the Common Core
critical thinking and provide a useful reference for students
Standards in the following way:
during the writing process. The model texts are located on
Level Compass Grade either the Opener or the Getting Started page in a topic.
Writing Log Audience has students consider who their audience will
be, which guides them to determine appropriate register,
Each level of the Compass Writing Log is divided into
language and information.
nine topics. The titles of the topics are in the form of Big
Questions, which are shared across all components in the Format refers to the text type; for example, blog,
series. Each topic contains eight lessons of class material newspaper article or comic strip. An awareness of the
that is based on six pages of content in the Student format helps students plan appropriate text features and
Book: Opener, Getting Started, Planning, Organizing, consider appropriate language.
My First Draft, My Second Draft and My Story or Topic refers to the subject, or main idea, of the text.
Text pages. Planning the topic helps students maintain focus and
direction in their texts.
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Students apply the RAFT writing technique twice in each Publishing and Digital Publishing
set of lessons. They analyze the model text with RAFT in As with presenting, publishing motivates students and
Getting Started (Lesson 2) and plan their own writing with gives them a sense of purpose for their writing, as well as a
RAFT in Planning My Text (Lesson 3). clear idea of audience. There are different places in which
students can publish their work. They may be interested,
Peer Review
for example, in creating books of their work or a class
My First Draft and My Second Draft lessons include a
anthology of works on one topic.
peer review checklist. The process of peer review supports
collaboration and enhances student learning. Students Digital publishing makes content accessible via computer
employ critical thinking skills to analyze and comment technology. It also further motivates students and increases
on their classmates’ drafts. In turn, students expand this the audience for their work. It gives them the opportunity
analysis to their own texts, which leads to more organized to practice word processing and digital publishing, and
and accurate pieces of writing. to interact by commenting on each other’s work. The
Compass Digital Platform www.logcompass.com includes a
Illustrations
user-friendly classroom blogging tool for digital publishing.
The My Story or My Text pages in each topic includes
It allows students to publish their writing. The teacher
a page for students to illustrate their work. Illustrations
can check all content before it is published on the blog.
foster visual literacy by helping students understand and
Students can then comment on the work, and the teacher
make connections between language and images. It can
can moderate the comments to ensure they are appropriate
be rewarding for students to explore a variety of types of
and constructive. This gives students a full digital
illustration, such as painting, collage, photos and icons.
publishing experience.
Presenting
Vocabulary Notebook
In Lesson 8, My Presentation, students share their work
Learning new words is a crucial part of language learning.
with their classmates. This has several important benefits.
Reading, writing, researching and brainstorming are
First, knowing their classmates will read and comment on
excellent ways for students to encounter and use new
their writing motivates students and gives them a sense of
words in context. Maintaining a vocabulary notebook
audience. This task also provides an opportunity for students
helps students collect and organize new words so they
to develop a broader range of writing strategies, such as
may continue to expand their lexical range. Consider
note-taking, writing responses and writing introductions for
discussing or demonstrating ways of recording vocabulary,
their presentations. Finally, students develop presentation
such as alphabetically or thematically, with definitions,
skills and reading strategies, such as pacing, pausing, making
sample language and phrases, illustrations or translations.
eye-contact and reading from notes.
Encourage students to regularly record new vocabulary and
Rubrics to refer back to their vocabulary notebooks when writing
The last page of each topic provides an optional rubric and editing their work.
specific to the learning objectives of the topic. Rubrics
Homework
facilitate consistent, objective assessment and make the
There are homework options in some of the lessons
task of evaluating texts more structured for the teacher.
in Compass Writing Log Teacher’s Guide Levels 3 to 6.
Compass Writing Log rubrics provide teachers with the
Homework is not mandatory in the Compass Writing Log;
option of formative or summative assessment by topic or by
however, homework options are included for teachers who
level. Scores can be calculated by assigning two points for
are expected or required to assign homework as a part of
each performance indicator (PI) “above level,” one point for
this course. Where possible, homework options aim to help
each of those “at level” and zero for each PI “below level.”
students explore writing and topics in interesting, practical
Use of the rubrics is entirely at the teacher’s discretion.
and communicative ways.
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Writing Strategies Planning Point of View
The point of view is the perspective from which an
Creating a Brochure
author recounts a narrative or presents information.
Creating a brochure requires writers to organize
In the first-person point of view, the author writes about
informative and persuasive content about a product or a
a personal experience using pronouns such as I and we. In
service that readers will want to purchase.
the third-person point of view, a narrator recounts another
Creating Topic Sentences person’s experience and uses pronouns such as he, she
Topic sentences present the topic and main idea of a and they. Writers often choose first-person point of view
paragraph. They are an important signposting technique. because it helps them convey emotions effectively. It also
Developing this strategy helps students produce generates more empathy from readers.
well-organized, coherent texts.
Planning the Purpose of a Text
Citing Sources A text with an easily identifiable purpose indicates focus
When quoting explicitly from a text, it is essential that and organization. Developing planning skills will lead to
writers reference and cite their sources. Sources are often more coherent and cohesive texts.
found in footnotes and the quotations have a superscripted
Quoting Explicitly from a Text
number after them in the text.
A quotation is a word, phrase, sentence or paragraph taken
Developing a Topic directly from a text. A direct quotation from a credible
The ability to develop a topic in an opinion essay requires source can support an explanation or summary of a text.
writers to introduce a topic, express an opinion about it and Writers use quotations to support their ideas.
support their opinions with definitions and examples.
Skimming and Taking Notes
Developing a Narrative Skimming is the ability to quickly read a text for the main
Features of a narrative include a setting, characters, a ideas. It is also an essential step that precedes taking
problem, events and a solution. Learning to develop a notes. When doing research, students must be able to
narrative is fundamental to fiction writing. skim texts for the main ideas and to determine if the text
Editing is an appropriate source. Once students have chosen
Editing is a critical thinking strategy that is essential to suitable reference texts, they take notes. Taking notes is
the draft-writing process. When editing, students identify the ability to concisely write the main ideas or most useful
and correct capitalization and punctuation, spelling and information that will help them write their own texts.
content in their texts. Using Commas
Elements in a Comic Commas are important for making ideas clear and making
This strategy requires students to develop a coherent texts more readable. They can be used to combine ideas
story that combines and balances the elements in a comic: in compound sentences before the words and or but. The
illustrations, dialogue and narration. use of commas can change the meaning of a sentence, so
correct usage is an essential writing skill.
Imagining Your Audience
This strategy enables students to adopt the correct register
and tone for their writing. It also helps them in including
the necessary background information and level of detail in
their texts.
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Using End Punctuation Reading Strategies
End punctuation, such as periods, is essential to writing.
Five-Finger Retell
A text must have end punctuation so readers know when
Five-finger retell is a memory aid to help students organize
one idea ends and another begins. An exclamation point
and retell key information in a text. Each finger represents
at the end of a sentence indicates strong feelings, and
a question: Who are the characters? What is the setting?
multiple exclamation points or question marks indicate
What is the problem? What are the events? and What is
even stronger feelings. They can be used to evoke the same
the solution?
feelings in readers.
Fluency: Expression
Using Headings
One aspect of fluency is expression—the appropriate use
Brochures have information organized into sections. Each
of phrasing and intonation in reading. Effective storytellers
section has a title called a heading. Writers use headings
and presenters are able to raise or lower their voice
in brochures to interest and engage readers and to indicate
intonation to match the meaning of the story or text. Using
the main idea of the section. Using headings helps students
expression when reading makes the text more engaging
write well-organized texts, and it helps readers scan for
for the audience. It also enables the audience to better
information quickly.
understand and relate to it.
Using Persuasive Language
Identifying the Elements in a Comic
Writers use persuasive language to evoke an emotional
A comic is composed of four elements: captions
response in readers. The ability to select and use specific
(narration), illustrations, speech balloons and thought
language that corresponds to their intended message is
bubbles. Readers must be able to identify the text format
essential to effective, purpose-driven communication.
of a comic and understand how the elements or features
Using Quotation Marks support or enhance the story.
When quoting explicitly from a text, it is essential to have
Identifying the Author’s Purpose
quotation marks before and after the quotes. They signal to
An author writes for different purposes: to persuade, to
readers that someone said those exact words.
inform or to entertain. Effective readers are able to identify
Writing a Conclusion an author’s purpose by analyzing the text and its features
A conclusion is the last paragraph in a text. It brings the such as word choice and text content. This skill gives
reader’s attention back to the topic of the text and leaves readers an added layer of understanding.
the reader with a sense of closure.
Identifying Opinions
Writing an Introduction Writers often use phrases, such as I like or I think, to
A well-written introduction presents the main idea of a text express opinions. The ability to identify phrases that
and interests the reader. It is a basic writing strategy that express opinions is a critical thinking skill and a feature of
students must develop. text analysis.
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Identifying the Purpose of the Narrator
The narrator (found in captions) in a comic can support the
story line in a number of ways. The narrator may set the
scene, describe illustrations or provide time cue words that
connect one event and frame to another.
Scanning
Scanning is the ability to quickly look for and find specific
information in a text. Effective readers can scan a text
for specific information or text features that help them
accomplish a task.
Summarizing
The strategy of summarizing enables students to identify
the topic and the most important ideas in a text. Before,
during and after reading, effective readers ask themselves
questions such as What’s the topic? What are the main
ideas? Are they relevant to the author’s position or topic?
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At the end of each Compass Writing Log Student Book, there is an Editing page. It gives
students the opportunity to practice and confirm knowledge of the capitalization,
spelling and punctuation rules they learned throughout the level.
Astrid’s
Kingdom
A strid stretched lazily in bed as the sun streamed through the window.
“Astrid!” her mother called.. G Get up now. There’s a lot to do today.
y.
Astrid groaned loudly. “Can I stay in bed for a bitt P Please, Mom?”
“No,” said her mother firmly. “You need to pick up your room and finish your
schoolwork before lunch h ”
“That is SO unfair ir ” complained Astrid. “You never let me stay in bed on the weekend.
You always make me do chores. It’s my room. I don’t care iff is it a mess.”
“astrid,
“ast we’ve talked about this,” said her mother. “You have a right to your own space ce
but it’s your responsibility to keep it neat! When I get back from the store, I want your
room to be spotless.”
As she heard the apartment door close behind her mother, Astrid pulled the covers
over her head. If I’m in charge someday, she thought, I’ll let people have fun all the time.
I won’t make them do things they don’t want to do. No at all!
o responsabilities a
Suddenly y there
t was a bright flash, and Astrid found herself in the middle of a Str
Street!
She looked around in amazement. People were dancing and singing. Kidss are w were
whizzing around on the sidewalks and roads on scooters and skateboards.
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Topic Model Text Writing Strategies Capitalization and Punctuation
Pages 16-23
Pages 48-55
Pages 64-71
Editing Page 80
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Think about the Big Question
while you write.
Analyze the
model text.
There is a model text
for every topic.
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Write your first draft. Write your second draft.
Evaluate
classmates’ texts.
Evaluate what
you learned.
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Each lesson begins with a Lead in to the
Lesson activity to introduce students to
Each topic provides an the theme of the topic.
overview of the genre, format
and Writing Strategy Focus.
Lesson 1 includes reading
strategies that enable
students to develop their
reading comprehension
and critical thinking skills.
Homework Option
suggests out-of-class
activities for students
to continue exploring
the topic.
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Each topic includes at least one
Subject Connection that incorporates
CLIL (Content and Language Integrated
Learning) activities into a lesson and a
concise explanation of how the activities
link to the subject and the topic. Each lesson focuses on
different, level-appropriate
writing strategies.
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Lesson 8 includes reading
strategies that enable students
to develop their reading and
presentation skills.
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To p ic 4 Why do we dream?
Writing Log: pages 32-39
Genre Writing Strategy Focus
Opinion Essay Developing a Topic
An opinion essay is a text that expresses the writer’s perspective about a What is it? The ability to develop a topic in an opinion essay requires
subject using rational, convincing reasons, explanations and examples. writers to introduce a topic, express an opinion about it and support
The text may have three or more paragraphs. The introduction presents their opinions with definitions and examples.
the subject and possibly the writer’s opinion. Each following paragraph What will students do? Students will learn to use definitions,
develops the opinion and reasons for it by providing explanations or explanations, examples and reasons to develop a topic.
examples that support it. The conclusion restates the opinion and Why is it important? It is important for students to be able to structure
summarizes the reasons. and write a well-developed essay. It requires them to use critical
thinking skills to analyze a topic, take a position and use the most
Format compelling information to support it.
Newspaper Article How will students build on previous knowledge? In previous
A newspaper is composed of articles organized into sections such as Compass Writing Logs, students learn to write essays that contain
feature articles, editorials, international news, business and entertainment an introduction, body and conclusion. They also learn to express and
or lifestyle. Most newspapers also include opinion articles in any of the support opinions using reasons and examples. In this topic, students
sections and may be written by staff or freelance writers. Characteristics of continue to develop their organizational writing skills.
a newspaper article include a headline, byline and pictures. In this topic,
students will write an opinion essay about daydreaming.
Lessons Preview
Lesson Pages Lesson Focus Teaching Resources
Art Connection
T 55
To p ic 4
by Roger Dorsett
Our minds are always working. If we are bored or distracted, we start imagining things
or daydreaming. Daydreaming means “to think pleasant thoughts about your life or
future while you are awake.”1 It is the opposite of paying attention or being focused.
When I daydream, I like to think about my future, and I imagine fun things. Most of the
time I think about drawing because I want to be a famous illustrator. People would ask
me to draw things such as mythical creatures or superheroes. When I imagine this,
I get excited. I also get a lot of new ideas, and I want to draw them. I think this shows
that daydreaming can motivate people to “work toward accomplishing their goals.”2
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Lead in to the Lesson (25 min.) Take the Lesson Further (10 min.)
Art Connection • Form small groups. Say: The writer daydreams about being
• Write the word Daydreaming on the board. Elicit its a famous illustrator. Ask: When you daydream about your
meaning. (Happy thoughts about your life and your future.) future, what do you see? Have students answer the question.
• Ask: What do you daydream about? Elicit a few ideas. • Encourage students to share their ideas with the class.
• Hand out sheets of paper, colored pencils and crayons.
Homework Option
• Have students draw a picture of what they daydream about.
Suggest that students keep a record of how often they
• Form small groups. Have students share their pictures and
daydream and what they daydream about over the next
describe them.
few days.
Manage Your Class
Some students may not feel comfortable talking about their
daydreams. Encourage them to share, but do not insist
they do so.
1 Read the text. Circle the correct words to complete 4 Punctuation Find a sentence with quotation marks in
the sentences. (15 min.) the text. Write it here. (10 min.)
• Have students read the sentences and options, then read the • Read the Punctuation entry aloud and have students
text on page 32 and complete the activity on page 33. follow along.
• Form pairs. Tell students to compare and confirm answers. • Remind students that we use quotation marks when we are
• Write the following questions on the board: writing the exact words from another person or source.
1 How do you know the author is a student? • Have students find and write a quotation from the text.
2 How do you know the text is probably from a
Answers: Daydreaming means “to think pleasant thoughts about your life
school newspaper? or future while you are awake.” / I think this shows that daydreaming can
• Tell students to find information in the text that supports motivate people to “work toward accomplishing their goals.”
their answers. (Possible answers: 1. The picture is of a young
boy, who might be the author. The author writes about Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
wanting to be a famous illustrator, so he probably isn’t • Form small groups. Have students agree or disagree with the
an adult yet. 2. It’s probably an article from a newspaper author’s opinion about daydreaming. Encourage them to give
because it doesn’t have enough scientific information such as reasons for their answers.
facts, statistics and information from studies to be a science
magazine article, and it is not a story.)
Answers: 1. b 2. c 3. a 4. c
T 58 Getting Started
1 Read the text. Circle the correct words to
complete the sentences.
2 Read the text again. Number the information in the correct order.
What the author daydreams about
What daydreaming means
How the writer feels about his daydreams
The writer’s opinion about daydreaming
The reasons people daydream
Topic 4 33
2 Think about daydreaming. Brainstorm and write the words you might use.
3 Choose one thing you daydream about. Write some ideas for your text.
34 Topic 4
Writing Strategy
Planning the Purpose of a Text
A text with an easily identifiable purpose indicates focus and organization. Developing
planning skills will lead to more coherent and cohesive texts.
Lead in to the Lesson (15 min.) • Direct students’ attention to the model text on page 32.
Reading Strategy Have them identify opinion words or phrases. (I think.)
Write them on the board.
• Have students read the model text on page 32 again.
• Have students think about daydreaming and add more words
• Write Topic and Main ideas on the board. Elicit the meaning
to the charts in their books.
of each.
• Encourage students to share their ideas with the class.
• Explain that summarizing a text means focusing on the most
important information: the topic and main ideas. Possible answers:
• Ask: What’s the text about? (Daydreaming.) Say: Start your Things I Daydream About Description Words for
summary by saying, “The text is about daydreaming.” the future, fun things, drawing, Daydreams
being a famous illustrator, what he positive, happy, bored,
• Form pairs. Tell students to summarize the model text. would draw distracted, helpful
Remind them they can use the information in activity 2 on
Feelings about Daydreaming Opinion Words
page 33 to help them organize their information. excited, happy, motivated I like, I think, I believe
• Encourage students to share their summaries with the class.
Planning My Text T 61
Lesson 4
Teaching Resources Writing Strategy Focus
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 34 and 35 Developing a Topic
Internet access Writing Strategies
Skimming and Taking Notes
Skimming is the ability to quickly read a text for the main ideas. It is also an essential step that
precedes taking notes. When doing research, students must be able to skim texts for the main
ideas to determine if the text is an appropriate source. Once students have chosen suitable
reference texts, they take notes. Taking notes is the ability to concisely write the main ideas or
most useful information that will help them write their own texts.
Quoting Explicitly from a Text
A quotation is a word, phrase, sentence or paragraph taken directly from a text. A direct
quotation from a credible source can support an explanation or summary of a text. Writers use
quotations to support their ideas.
Creating Topic Sentences
Topic sentences present the topic and main idea of a paragraph. They are an important
signposting technique. Developing this strategy helps students produce well-organized,
coherent texts.
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) 5 Write a topic sentence for your introduction,
• Have students recall what they daydream about, but tell them development and conclusion. (15 min.)
not to say it. Writing Strategy
• Form small groups. Have students take turns acting out their • Elicit the meaning and purpose of a topic sentence.
daydreams and guessing what they are. (A topic sentence is usually the first sentence in a paragraph.
It presents the main idea for the paragraph.)
4 Do research and complete the concept map for your • Tell students to review the information in the Introduction,
text. (30 min.)
Development and Conclusion sections of their concept maps
Writing Strategies and write topic sentences.
• Point out the sections of the concept map. Elicit the
importance of each section. Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
• Have students review their notes about daydreaming on • Form pairs. Have students share their topic sentences.
page 34. • Encourage students to comment or make suggestions.
• Explain that they are going to do research and find more
information to include in their articles. Ask: When you are
looking for information, do you read everything carefully or do
you read quickly to understand the main ideas? (Read quickly
for main ideas.) What research information will you include?
(Quotations that support my ideas and opinion.)
• Say: After you find information you want to include in your
article, you need to take notes. Ask: What information will
you write in your notes: complete sentences or main ideas?
(Complete sentences if it is a quote and main ideas for
the rest.)
• Tell students to use their mobile devices or school computers
to skim websites and find information that supports
their ideas and opinions and take notes. Monitor and
help as needed.
T 62 Organizing My Ideas
4 Do research and complete the concept
map for your text.
Introduction
What is daydreaming?
Why am I writing about it?
Development
Conclusion
Sources
2
3
Topic 4 35
My Classmate’s Checklist
2 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The text is about daydreaming. Yes No
36 Topic 4
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) 2 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the
Writing Strategies sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No. (10 min.)
• Write Introduction, Body and Conclusion on the board. • Form pairs. Have students exchange books. Tell them to read
• Elicit the purpose of each section. (The introduction presents the articles and complete the checklist.
the topic and main ideas of a text. The body provides more • Tell students to return the books to their classmates.
information about the main ideas. The conclusion restates the • Have students read the checklist and circle the items their
main ideas and includes a final analysis or opinions.) classmates marked No. Tell them to circle the sections of the
• Write quotes on the board. Ask: Which section has quotes? articles, if any, that require corrections.
(Any of the sections can have a quote.) • Encourage students to say what they liked about each
• Direct students’ attention to the model text on page 32. Point other’s articles.
to the superscripted numbers 1 and 2 after the quotations.
Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
Ask: What are these numbers for? (They reference a source
cited at the bottom of the page or at the end of the text.) • Form pairs. Have students share their introductions.
Explain that these numbers are called footnote references Encourage students to give feedback.
and that the list of sources at the end of the text are called
footnotes. Remind students they must reference and cite their
sources when quoting other people’s ideas and words.
My First Draft T 65
Lesson 6
Teaching Resources Writing Strategies
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 33, 36 and 37 Using Quotation Marks
Colored pencils When quoting explicitly from a text, it is essential to have quotation marks before and after
the quotes. They signal to readers that someone said those exact words.
Citing Sources
Editing
Editing is a critical thinking strategy that is essential to the draft-writing process.
When editing, students identify and correct capitalization and punctuation, spelling
and content in their texts.
T 66 My Second Draft
My Second Draft
3 Rewrite your text.
My Classmate’s Checklist
4 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The text is about daydreaming. Yes No
Topic 4 37
Lead in to the Lesson (15 min.) • Explain that pictures can help writers provide visual
Writing Strategy details that then help readers understand the text better.
• Have students read their articles and decide what they
• Elicit the types of mistakes students found when editing their
want to draw.
first drafts. (Mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, spelling
• Form small groups. Have students share ideas for their
and grammar.)
drawings. Encourage classmates to ask questions and
• Hand out colored pencils.
give suggestions.
• Have students work individually to review the changes
• Tell students they have twenty minutes to plan and draw
and suggestions on their second drafts. Tell them to mark
their pictures on page 38. Monitor and help as needed.
anything they need to correct. Monitor and help as needed.
Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
Write a Final Version (15 min.)
Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
• Have students write their final versions on page 39,
incorporating the changes they marked on their second drafts. • Tell students to read the final version of their articles.
• Form pairs. Have students work together to check for errors • Have them complete the checklist on page 39.
and make final corrections. • Explain to students that they will present their articles to
the class in the next lesson.
Illustrate the Text (25 min.)
Homework Option
• Direct students’ attention to page 32.
Suggest that students read their articles in preparation for
• Ask: What picture does Roger use to illustrate his article?
their presentations.
(A picture of a boy daydreaming.)
Title:
My Checklist
Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
38 Topic 4 Topic 4 39
T 68 My Text
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Lesson 8
Teaching Resources Reading Strategies
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 32, 38 and 39 Pausing for Meaning
Proficient readers pause while reading a text to enhance comprehension. This strategy also
applies to reading aloud. Readers pause briefly after commas and at the end of sentences in
order to facilitate listeners’ understanding of the text and maintain their interest in it.
Making Eye Contact
Making eye contact while giving a presentation is one of the most critical presentation skills
students must develop. It signals self-confidence and credibility. When presenters make eye
contact, the audience is also more likely to pay attention and connect with the presenters.
My Presentation T 69
Topic 4: Why do we dream?
Above Level At Level Below Level
Content / Clearly describes daydreaming. Somewhat clearly describes Does not describe daydreaming.
Information Clearly expresses feelings and daydreaming. Does not express feelings and opinions
opinions about daydreaming. Somewhat clearly expresses feelings about daydreaming.
Effectively uses quotes to support and opinions about daydreaming. Does not use quotes to support ideas
ideas and opinions. Somewhat effectively uses quotes to or opinions.
Accurately uses footnotes to cite support ideas and opinions. Does not use footnotes to cite sources
sources for quotes. Somewhat accurately uses footnotes to for quotes.
cite sources for quotes.
Organization Effectively and logically organizes Adequately and somewhat logically Does not organize content into three
content into three paragraphs: organizes content into three paragraphs: introduction, development
introduction, development paragraphs: introduction, development and conclusion.
and conclusion. and conclusion. Topic sentences do not present
Topic sentences clearly present Topic sentences somewhat clearly paragraph content.
paragraph content. present paragraph content.
Expression Consistently uses above- and Somewhat consistently uses Does not use at-level vocabulary.
• vocabulary at-level vocabulary. at-level vocabulary. Does not use phrases to express
Effectively uses phrases to express Adequately uses phrases to express opinions and feelings.
opinions and feelings. opinions and feelings.
Conventions Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use simple,
• complete simple, complete sentences. uses simple, complete sentences. complete sentences.
sentences Consistently spells above- and at-level Somewhat consistently spells at-level Does not spell at-level
• spelling vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly.
• capitalization
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use capital letters at
• punctuation
capital letters at the beginning of uses capital letters at the beginning of the beginning of sentences or for
sentences and for proper nouns. sentences and for proper nouns. proper nouns.
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use quotation marks.
quotation marks. uses quotation marks. Does not use footnote references.
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately
footnote references. uses footnote references.
T 70
To p ic 5 How do we explain
prehistoric times?
Writing Log: pages 40-47
Genre Writing Strategy Focus
Advertising Creating a Brochure
Advertising is a form of marketing material that provides information What is it? Creating a brochure requires writers to organize informative
about a product or service. Its purpose is to persuade or to convince people and persuasive content about a product or a service that readers will
to do something. It uses creative and interesting ways to organize content, want to purchase.
such as attention-getting titles and headings, as well as colorful pictures What will students do? Students will learn to create
or illustrations. Advertising texts can be found in a variety of contexts logically organized, persuasive content.
and formats, such as billboards, TV and radio commericals, magazines, Why is it important? It is important for students to be able to identify,
newspapers, websites and brochures. organize and use persuasive, descriptive language in a text.
How will students build on previous knowledge? In Compass Writing
Format Log 3 Topic 7, students created a persuasive text for an informative
Brochure poster. In this topic, students will continue to develop their persuasive
An advertising brochure is a persuasive text used to promote a product writing skills.
or service. Content in a brochure is succinct and organized into sections
that include headings and illustrations to attract and maintain readers’
attention. In this topic, students will create a brochure for a prehistoric park.
Lessons Preview
Lesson Pages Lesson Focus Teaching Resources
Art Connection
4 Organizing 40, 42 and 43 Skimming and Taking Notes • Websites about prehistoric animals
My Ideas • Internet access
T 71
To p ic 5
historic
Pre
Adventure Tour
Tyrannosaurus Rex
Adventure Park
Where knowledge
and fun meet!
ing Center
Interactive Learn
40
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) • Have students identify the introduction line and complete
• Have students collect their sculptures from the drying area. item 2.
• Ask: What information can you give about your prehistoric • Form pairs. Have students complete items 3 to 5 together.
animals? (Color, size, food, abilities, etc.) Answers: 1. Prehistoric Adventure Park 2. Where knowledge and fun meet!
• Form small groups. Have students describe their 3. Tyrannosaurus rex, pterosaurs 4. Interactive Learning Center, Adventure
Tour 5. prehistoricap@org.com
prehistoric animals.
4 Punctuation Follow the instructions. (10 min.)
Know Your Students
Students haven’t researched prehistoric animals yet, so their • Read the Punctuation entry aloud and have students
knowledge about them may be limited. Be prepared to give follow along.
students some basic information about their prehistoric • Elicit other uses of quotation marks, such as for
animals so they can share descriptions in their groups. direct quotations.
• Have students complete activity 4 individually.
1 Read the text. Circle the correct words to complete Answers: 1. Pterosaur means “flying lizard.” 2. It was not very big, and it
didn’t have feathers.
the sentences. (10 min.)
• Have students read the incomplete sentences, then read Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
the text. • Have students talk about different theme or adventure parks
• Tell them to complete the activity individually. they have visited or know about.
Answers: 1. b 2. a 3. c 4. a
2 Read the text again. Circle the correct answers. (10 min.)
• Have students read the questions, then read the text again.
• Tell them to answer question 1 individually.
• For questions 2 and 3, elicit the words in the acronym PIE.
(Persuade, inform and entertain.)
• Explain that the objective of the park (question 2) is different
from the purpose of the text.
• Have students complete questions 2 and 3.
Answers: 1. c 2. a 3. b
T 74 Getting Started
1 Read the text. Circle the correct words to
complete the sentences.
5 Contact information:
Topic 5 41
2 Think about your prehistoric park. Brainstorm and write the words you might use.
3 Choose two main attractions. Write some ideas for your brochure.
42 Topic 5
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) 2 Think about your prehistoric park. Brainstorm and
• Write RAFT on the board. Elicit the words in the acronym. write the words you might use. (15 min.)
(Role of the writer, audience, format, topic.) Writing Strategies
• Explain that for this text type, role of the writer is replaced • Draw the chart and write the headings on the board.
with purpose of the text. • Have students refer to the model text on page 40.
• Form pairs. Have students think about the model text and Elicit information for each category. (Park Description:
identify the purpose, audience, format and topic. where knowledge and fun meet, prehistoric, adventure.
• Encourage students to share their answers with the Main Attractions: Tyrannosaurus rex and pterosaurs.
class. (Purpose: persuade. Audience: anyone interested in Park Activities: interactive learning center, adventure tour.
prehistoric animals. Format: brochure. Topic: prehistoric Phrases to Invite People to the Park: visit, come see, come to
adventure park.) our park.)
• Form small groups. Have students brainstorm and write
1 Answer the questions. (20 min.)
more words for each category.
Writing Strategy and Reading Strategy
Possible answers:
• Explain that students will create brochures for a prehistoric
Park Description Main Attractions
theme park. prehistoric, adventurous, fun, T. rex, pterosaur, panoplosaurus,
• Have students answer questions 1 to 3. For question 2, tell educational, exciting, thrilling, minmi, stegosaurus, confuciusornis
them to think about who would be interested in their type of unbelievable, incredible,
breathtaking, frightening
theme park. Monitor and help as needed.
• Read question 4 aloud. Elicit a few ideas. Park Activities Phrases to Invite People to
virtual tour, safari, guided tour, the Park
• Write scanning on the board. Elicit or teach its meaning. interactive learning center, visit, learn about, come, discover,
(To quickly look for specific information.) adventure tour, dinner with experience, meet, see
• Write the website links on the board. a dinosaur
• Form pairs. Have students use their mobile devices or school
computers to scan websites about prehistoric animals and 3 Choose two main attractions. Write some ideas for
answer question 4. Explain that they are only choosing two your brochure. (10 min.)
prehistoric animals at this time and that it is not necessary to • Ask: What are the two main attractions at the Prehistoric
take notes. Adventure Park? (T. rex, pterosaurs.)
• Form small groups. Have students share their answers. • Have students think about two main attractions for their
theme parks and write some ideas for their brochures.
Planning My Brochure T 77
Lesson 4
Teaching Resources Writing Strategy
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 40, 42 and 43 Skimming and Taking Notes
Websites about prehistoric animals: https://www. Skimming is the ability to quickly read a text for the main ideas. It is also an essential step that
activewild.com/list-of-prehistoric-animals-that-are- precedes taking notes. When doing research, students must be able to skim texts for the main
not-dinosaurs/, https://www.kids-dinosaurs.com/ ideas to determine if the text is an appropriate source. Once students have chosen suitable
dinosaur-facts.html reference texts, they take notes. Taking notes is the ability to concisely write the main ideas or
most useful information that will help them write their own texts.
Internet access
Lead in to the Lesson (5 min.) • Have students think of an attention-getting name for their
• Write the following sentences on the board before class: theme parks and complete that section in the concept map.
1 means “flying lizard.” It was the first vertebrate • Tell students to review their notes on page 42.
creature that could fly. It was not very big, and it didn’t • For the Main Attractions section, ask: Why did the park in
have feathers. the model text feature the T. rex and pterosaur? (The T. rex
2 was the largest predator from the late Jurassic was the largest dinosaur during the Jurassic period, and the
period. It was 14 meters long and more than 6.5 meters tall. pterosaur was the first vertebrate dinosaur that could fly.)
• Have students recall the adventure tours in the model text. • Tell students to think of reasons why their audiences would
Ask: What are the prehistoric animals you can see there? want to see their chosen main attractions and write notes
(Tyrannosaurus rex and pterosaurs.) about it.
• Tell students to read the descriptions on the board and • Have students complete the rest of the concept map
complete them. (1. Pterosaur. 2. T. rex.) individually. Monitor and help as needed.
• Elicit the information included in the descriptions.
Take the Lesson Further (10 min.)
(Meaning of its name, abilities, period it lived in, size.)
Write the categories on the board. • Form pairs. Have students use the information on their
concept maps to describe their theme parks. Encourage them
Writing Strategy (15 min.) to ask questions and give feedback or suggestions.
• Direct students’ attention to their answers to question 4 in
activity 1 on page 42.
• Write the website links on the board.
• Tell students they have fifteen minutes to research their
prehistoric animals. Explain they can use the website links on
the board or research others.
• Point to the categories on the board. Have them skim
websites for information about the prehistoric animals and
take notes.
T 78 Organizing My Ideas
4 Complete the concept map for
your brochure.
Main Attractions
Park Activities
Contact Information
Topic 5 43
Heading: Heading:
Heading: Heading:
My Classmate’s Checklist
2 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The brochure is about a prehistoric park. Yes No
2 The brochure invites people to go to the park. Yes No
3 There are main attractions. Yes No
44 Topic 5
Lead in to the Lesson (5 min.) 2 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the
• Write the names of four or five of the students’ prehistoric sentences. Mark () Yes or No. (10 min.)
animals, with the letters scrambled, on the board. • Form pairs. Have students exchange books. Tell them to read
• Form pairs. Have students identify the names of the the brochures and complete the checklist.
prehistoric animals. • Tell students to return the books to their classmates.
• Have students read the checklist and circle the items their
1 Write the text for your brochure. Make notes about classmates marked No. Tell them to circle the sections of the
the pictures you will include. (35 min.) brochures, if any, that require corrections.
Writing Strategies • Encourage students to say what they liked about each
• Direct students’ attention to the model text on page 40. other’s brochures.
• Read the introduction line from the model text aloud: Visit
Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
the late Jurassic period at the Prehistoric Adventure Park!
Ask: What is this? (The introduction line.) What does it do? • Form pairs. Have students share their introduction lines.
(It invites readers to go to the park.) Encourage them to give feedback.
• Ask: What information do you learn about the park in the
Homework Option
introduction line? (The type of park it is and its name.) What
Suggest that students find and bring in a number of images
is the heading above the introduction line? (Where knowledge
to illustrate their brochures.
and fun meet!) What is the purpose of this heading? (To interest
readers and tell them they will learn and have fun there.)
• Remind students that the text combines descriptions with
persuasive language to convince readers to visit the park.
• Have students look at the model text and their charts on
page 42. Ask: What persuasive language does the author use?
(Imperative form: visit, learn, come.)
• Remind students that the model text also describes the main
attractions as a way to interest readers. Ask: How are the
T. rex and pterosaur described? (The author describes the size
of the T. rex and says it was the “most ferocious.” The author
gives the meaning of the name “pterosaur” and describes why
it was special.)
• Tell students they are going to describe the main attractions
and use persuasive language in their brochures.
• Direct students’ attention to the template on page 44.
Ask: What are the headings about? (The topics of the sections
from their concept maps: Name of the Park, Main Attractions,
Park Activities, Contact Information.)
• Have students use information from their concept maps on
page 43 and research notes on page 42 to write the first draft
of their brochures. Monitor and help as needed.
• Direct students’ attention to page 40.
• Ask: What pictures does the author use in the brochure?
(A logo for the park, pictures of the main attractions
and activites.)
• Explain that pictures can help writers provide visual details
that then help readers understand the text better.
• Have students read their brochures and make notes about
what they want to draw.
My First Draft T 81
Lesson 6
Teaching Resources Writing Strategies
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 44 and 45 Using Quotation Marks
Colored pencils When quoting explicitly from a text, it is essential to have quotation marks before and after
the quotes. They signal to readers that someone said those exact words.
Using Commas
Commas are important for making ideas clear and making texts more readable. They can be
used to combine ideas in compound sentences before the words and or but. The use of commas
can change the meaning of a sentence, so correct usage is an essential writing skill.
Editing
Editing is a critical thinking strategy that is essential to the draft-writing process. When editing,
students identify and correct capitalization and punctuation, spelling and content in their texts.
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) 4 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the
Writing Strategies sentences. Mark () Yes or No. (10 min.)
• Write the following sentences on the board before class: • Form pairs. Have students exchange books. Tell them to read
1 Pterosaur means flying lizard the brochures and complete the checklist.
2 It was not very big and it didn’t have feathers. • Tell students to return the books to their classmates.
• Elicit different types of punctuation. (A comma, period, • Have students read the checklist and circle the items their
quotation marks.) classmates marked No. Tell them to circle the sections of the
• Form pairs. Have students rewrite the sentences using brochures, if any, that require corrections.
correct punctuation. (1. Quotation marks around flying • Encourage students to ask about additional information.
lizard, period after lizard inside end quotation mark. These questions may help students think of extra information
2. A comma after big.) they would like to include in their drawings in Lesson 7.
• Invite a volunteer to add the correct punctuation marks to
Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
the sentences on the board.
• Form pairs. Have students share the descriptions of their
Writing Strategy (15 min.) prehistoric animals. Encourage them to give feedback
• Elicit the meaning of editing. (Checking their texts and suggestions.
for mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, spelling
and grammar.)
• Ask: What should each section have? (A heading, persuasive
language and possible descriptions.)
• Hand out colored pencils.
• Have students check the first draft of their brochures for
mistakes. Tell them to circle any mistakes they find. Monitor
and help as needed.
T 82 My Second Draft
My Second Draft
3 Rewrite the text for your brochure. Make notes
about the pictures you will include.
Heading: Heading:
Heading: Heading:
My Classmate’s Checklist
4 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The brochure is about a prehistoric park. Yes No
2 The brochure invites people to go to the park. Yes No
3 There are main attractions and descriptions of activities. Yes No
4 There is contact information. Yes No
Topic 5 45
Lead in to the Lesson (15 min.) • Have students write their final versions on pages 46 and 47,
Writing Strategies incorporating the changes they marked on their second drafts.
• Form pairs. Have students work together to check for errors
• Elicit the types of mistakes students found when editing their
and make final corrections.
first drafts. (Mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, spelling
and grammar.) Illustrate the Brochure (20 min.)
• Direct students’ attention to the model text on page 40.
• Have students read their brochures and notes for drawings.
Ask: Why does the writer use exclamation points? (To get
• Tell students they have fifteen minutes to draw their pictures.
readers excited about the adventure park.) Tell students to
Monitor and help as needed.
think about using exclamation points in their brochures.
• Hand out colored pencils. Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
• Have students work individually to review the changes
Read the sentences. Mark () Yes or No.
and suggestions on their second drafts. Tell them to mark
anything they need to correct. Monitor and help as needed. • Tell students to read the final version of their brochures.
• Have them complete the checklist on page 47.
Write a Final Version (15 min.)
• Direct students’ attention to pages 46 and 47. Explain that they
can use both pages to organize the sections of their brochures.
Remind them to leave space in each section for their drawings.
My Checklist
Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
46 Topic 5 Topic 5 47
T 84 My Brochure
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Lesson 8
Teaching Resources Reading Strategies
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 40, 46 and 47 Pausing for Meaning
Proficient readers pause while reading a text to enhance comprehension. This strategy also
applies to reading aloud. Readers pause briefly after commas and at the end of sentences in
order to facilitate listeners’ understanding of the text and maintain their interest in it.
Fluency: Expression
One aspect of fluency is expression—the appropriate use of phrasing and intonation in
reading. Effective storytellers and presenters are able to raise or lower their voice intonation
to match the meaning of the text or emphasize certain information. Using expression when
reading makes the text more engaging for the audience. It also enables the audience to better
understand and relate to the text.
My Presentation T 85
Topic 5: How do we explain prehistoric times?
Above Level At Level Below Level
Content / Clearly describes a theme park, its Somewhat clearly describes a Does not describe a theme park, its
Information main attractions and activities. theme park, its main attractions main attractions or activities.
Effectively uses persuasive language to and activities. Does not use persuasive language to
interest readers. Adequately uses persuasive language interest readers.
Effectively uses drawings and pictures to interest readers. Does not use drawings or pictures
to represent section content and to Adequately uses drawings and pictures to represent section content or to
engage readers. to represent section content and to engage readers.
engage readers.
Organization Effectively and logically organizes Adequately and somewhat logically Does not organize content
content into sections. organizes content into sections. into sections.
Uses a title and headings that Uses a title and headings that Does not use a title and headings
accurately describe the brochure somewhat accurately describe the that describe the brochure or section
or section content and gets brochure or section content and gets content or gets readers’ attention.
readers’ attention. readers’ attention.
Expression Consistently uses above- and at- Somewhat consistently uses at- Does not use at-level vocabulary.
• vocabulary level vocabulary. level vocabulary. Does not use imperatives as a form of
• grammar Effectively uses imperatives as a form Adequately uses imperatives as a form persuasive language.
of persuasive language. of persuasive language.
Conventions Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use simple,
• complete simple, complete sentences. uses simple, complete sentences. complete sentences.
sentences Consistently spells above- or at-level Somewhat consistently spells at-level Does not spell at-level
• spelling vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly.
• capitalization
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and Does not use capital letters or end
• punctuation
capital letters and end punctuation. accurately uses capital letters and punctuation correctly.
Consistently and accurately uses end punctuation. Does not use quotation marks.
quotation marks. Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use commas to
Consistently and accurately uses uses quotation marks. combine ideas.
commas to combine ideas. Somewhat consistently and accurately
uses commas to combine ideas.
T 86
To p ic 6 What challenges do humans face?
Writing Log: pages 48-55
Genre Writing Strategy Focus
Realistic Fiction Elements in a Comic
Realistic fiction is a made-up story with imaginary What is it? This strategy requires students to develop a coherent story that combines
characters in situations that can happen in real life. and balances the elements in a comic: illustrations, dialogue and narration.
What will students do? Students will learn to incorporate elements of a comic so that
Format each one supports and enhances the story.
Comic Why is it important? The ability to create a comic that blends visual and textual
A comic is a sequence of interrelated, illustrated scenes features in order to tell an engaging story helps students further develop their creative
that tell a story that is often humorous or centers around an writing and critical thinking skills.
adventure or a challenge. In this topic, students will create How will students build on previous knowledge?
a comic about a challenge that is solved when the main In Compass Writing Log 3 Topic 8, students learn to create a comic by using pictures
character creates an invention. and dialogue to tell a story. In this topic, students learn to incorporate a narrative
element (captions) into their comics.
Lessons Preview
Lesson Pages Lesson Focus Teaching Resources
3 Planning 48 and 50 Identifying the Purpose of • Construction paper signs with the captions from the model text
My Comic the Narrator • Construction paper signs with the purposes of a narrator
Planning Point of View • A dictionary
• A thesaurus
T 87
To p ic 6
We are wasteful!
We use too much
water and energy!!
What can we do???
Hmm…
Maximus is not a
toy! He’ll help. He will
find leaks, and remind
children not to leave
lights on.
This is Maximus,
the super helper!
AND THEN…
What??? We don’t
need a crazy toy
around here!
48
Writing Strategy
Using End Punctation
End punctuation, such as periods, is essential to writing. A text must have end punctuation so
readers know when one idea ends and another begins. An exclamation point at the end of a
sentence indicates strong feelings, and multiple exclamation points or question marks indicate
even stronger feelings. They can be used to evoke the same feelings in readers.
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) 3 Elements in a Comic Look at the comic. How do you
Reading Strategy learn the following information? Write D (Dialogue),
N (Narrator) or I (Illustration). (10 min.)
• Draw a hand on the board before class. Write characters
above the thumb and setting, problem, events and solution • Display the construction paper signs on the board. Elicit the
above the fingers. meaning or purpose for each element.
• Explain to students that five-finger retell is a strategy to help • Direct students’ attention to the comic on page 48.
them recall and retell a story. • Ask: Which elements give us information about the
• Hold up your thumb. Ask: Who are the characters in the characters? (All of them do.) Which elements give us
model text? (Lee and Ms. Robbins.) information about the setting? (The illustrations and the
• Form pairs. Have students continue using the five-finger narrator’s line in the first frame.)
retell strategy to talk about the setting, problem, events • Read the Writing Strategy entry aloud and have students
and solution. follow along. Confirm that students understand that
• Ask: Is there a solution to the problem in the comic? (Yes, Lee Dialogue refers to the speech bubbles and that Narrator
invents a robot.) refers to the captions.
• Form pairs. Have students complete the activity.
Know Your Students Answers: 1. I 2. I (Thought bubble) 3. N 4. D
Some students may not recall the details of the comic.
If necessary, have them read the comic again before they 4 Punctuation Follow the instructions. (10 min.)
complete the five-finger retell. Writing Strategy
• Read the Punctuation entry aloud and have students
1 Read the comic. Circle the correct words to complete follow along.
the sentences. (10 min.) • Read question 1 aloud. Have students find a sentence in the
• Have students read the sentences, then read the comic. comic with more than one exclamation point.
• Tell them to complete the activity. • Have students answer question 2 individually.
Answers: 1. c 2. b 3. a 4. c Answers: 1. Ms. Robbins feels frustrated. 2. She feels frustrated and stressed.
2 Choose the best ending for the story. (10 min.) Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
• Direct students’ attention to the last frame of the comic. • Form pairs. Have students think of one or two other ways to
• Hand out students’ drawings. Have them share their endings solve the problem of using too much water and energy.
to the comic. • Encourage students to share their ideas with the class.
• Direct their attention to activity 2. Tell students to choose
the best ending. (Answers will vary, and they may prefer their
own endings to those in the book.)
T 90 Getting Started
1 Read the comic. Circle the correct words to
complete the sentences.
4 What challenge can you write about? Is there an invention that could solve it?
2 Think about challenges we face and the inventions that could help us. Brainstorm and
write the words you might use.
Challenges Inventions
50 Topic 6
Lead in to the Lesson (5 min.) 2 Think about challenges we face and the inventions
• Write RAFT on the board. Elicit the words that form the that could help us. Brainstorm and write the words
acronym. (Role of the writer, audience, format, topic.) you might use. (15 min.)
• Elicit the RAFT information for the model text. (Role: writer • Draw the chart in activity 2 on the board. Write the headings.
and illustrator. Audience: children. Format: comic book. • Elicit the students’ challenges and inventions from activity 1.
Topic: finding solutions.) Write a few ideas on the board.
• Form small groups. Have students brainstorm more
Reading Strategy (10 min.) challenges, inventions and what the inventions can do.
• Direct students’ attention to the model text on page 48. Tell students to think of characters and descriptions.
• Have students point out the narrator’s words. (Words Remind them they can use a dictionary or thesaurus to
in captions.) look for description words.
• Explain that the narrator can have more than one purpose. • Encourage students to share their ideas with the class.
Display the construction paper signs with captions on the Possible answers:
board in a column, then display the construction paper signs
Challenges Inventions
with the purposes of a narrator in another column. pollution, traffic, bad roads, solar energy, flying cars, jet packs,
• Point to the first caption (SCHOOLS FACE MANY unclean water, no public water filters
CHALLENGES…) and ask: What is the purpose of this transportation
caption? (To set the scene.) What Inventions Will Do Characters and Descriptions
• Continue the process for the other captions in the model catch pollution, stop the creation hardworking, creative, mad
of pollution, reduce the need for professor, genius science teacher,
text. (Caption 2: Describe the event. Captions 3 and 4: Provide roads, reduce traffic lazy uncle, stressed janitor
time cues.)
• Explain that a narrator provides important information in
3 Choose an invention. Write some ideas for your
a comic.
comic. (10 min.)
1 Answer the questions. (15 min.) • Ask: What was the invention in the model text? (A robot.)
Writing Strategy What did it do? (It found leaks and reminded children to turn
off the lights.)
• Write first-person point of view and third-person point of
• Have students review their notes and choose an invention
view on the board. Elicit or teach the meaning of point of
and write what it will do.
view. (The perspective from which a story is told.) Explain
that in the first-person point of view, a story is told by one of Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
the characters who uses I or we, and in the third-person point
• Form small groups. Have students share their invention ideas.
of view, a narrator tells the story using he, she or they.
• Read question 1 aloud. Have students decide if they want to
be the main character or a narrator.
• Tell students to answer questions 2 and 3 individually.
• For question 4, tell students that if they don’t know about
an invention to resolve a challenging situation, they can
create one.
Planning My Comic T 93
Lesson 4
Teaching Resources Writing Strategy
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 48, 50 and 51 Developing a Narrative
Features of a narrative include a setting, characters, a problem, events and a solution.
Learning to develop a narrative is fundamental to fiction writing.
T 94 Organizing My Ideas
4 Complete the chart for your comic.
What challenges do
Problem
the characters face?
What is the
Solution invention? What is it
like? What will it do?
What happens at
the end? Is the
End
ending funny? Sad?
Educational?
5 Look at your chart. Organize the information you will need for each frame of
your comic.
Topic 6 51
My Classmate’s Checklist
2 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The comic is about a problem and its solution. Yes No
52 Topic 6
Writing Strategy
Using End Punctuation
Homework Option
Suggest that students find one or two comics with
illustrations that they like and bring them to class.
Explain that these can help them think about the kind
of information they can include in their illustrations.
My First Draft T 97
Lesson 6
Teaching Resources Writing Strategy Focus
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 49, 52 and 53 Elements in a Comic
Colored pencils Writing Strategies
Editing
Editing is a critical thinking strategy that is essential to the draft-writing process.
When editing, students identify and correct capitalization and punctuation, spelling
and content in their texts.
Using End Punctuation
Lead in to the Lesson (10 min.) Take the Lesson Further (20 min.)
Writing Strategies • Have students draw six frames in their notebooks.
• Elicit the meaning of editing. (Checking their comics • Tell them to draw initial sketches of the illustrations for
for mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, spelling their comics.
and grammar.)
Know Your Students
• Elicit the rule for punctuation from page 49. Ask: Which
Some students may be critical about their drawing abilities
sentences should have more than one question mark
and reluctant to draw as a a result. Try to mitigate any
or exclamation point? (The sentences that express very
resulting anxiety by reminding them that this activity
strong feelings.)
is meant to be fun and they will not be graded on their
• Ask: What should each frame in the comic have? (One or
drawing skills.
more elements, such as captions, illustrations, speech balloons
or thought bubbles.)
• Hand out colored pencils.
• Have students check the first draft of their comics for
mistakes. Tell them to circle any mistakes they find.
Monitor and help as needed.
T 98 My Second Draft
My Second Draft
3 Rewrite the dialogue and narrator lines for your
comic. Make notes about drawings you will include.
My Classmate’s Checklist
4 Exchange books with a classmate. Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
1 The comic is about a problem and its solution. Yes No
2 The sequence is logical and easy to follow. Yes No
3 There is dialogue and there are narrator lines. Yes No
Topic 6 53
Lead in to the Lesson (15 min.) • Guide students through the process. First, have them draw
Writing Strategy the outlines for the frames. Then, suggest they sketch their
illustrations and outline the spaces needed for captions,
• Elicit the types of mistakes students found when editing their
speech balloons and thought bubbles. After that, students
first drafts. (Mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, spelling
should fill in the narrator lines and dialogue and complete
and grammar.)
their illustrations.
• Hand out colored pencils.
• Have students work individually to review the changes Take the Lesson Further (5 min.)
and suggestions on their second drafts. Tell them to mark
Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
anything they need to correct. Monitor and help as needed.
• Tell students to read the final version of their comics.
Write and Illustrate a Final Version (40 min.) • Have them complete the checklist on page 55.
• Tell students to look at pages 54 and 55. • Explain to students that they will present their comics to the
• Explain that they will use the pages for their comics and that class in the next lesson.
they need to think about which frames, if any, need more
space for illustrations.
My Checklist
Read the sentences. Mark (✓) Yes or No.
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Lesson 8
Teaching Resources Reading Strategy
Compass Writing Log 4 pages 48, 54 and 55 Fluency: Expression
One aspect of fluency is expression—the appropriate use of phrasing and intonation in
reading. Effective storytellers and presenters are able to raise or lower their voice intonation
to match the meaning of the text or emphasize certain information. Using expression when
reading makes the text more engaging for the audience. It also enables the audience to better
understand and relate to the text.
My Presentation T 101
Topic 6: What challenges do humans face?
Above Level At Level Below Level
Content / Clearly sets the scene. Somewhat clearly sets the scene. Does not set the scene.
Information Effectively presents a problem and Adequately presents a problem and Does not present a problem or events
events that lead to an invention and events that lead to an invention and that lead to an invention or a solution.
a solution. a solution. Does not use elements of a comic
Effectively uses elements of a comic Adequately uses elements of a comic (captions, illustrations, speech
(captions, illustrations, speech (captions, illustrations, speech balloons, thought bubbles) to tell
balloons, thought bubbles) to tell balloons, thought bubbles) to tell a story.
a story. a story.
Organization Effectively and logically organizes Adequately and somewhat logically Does not organize content into frames.
content into frames. organizes content into frames. Does not use captions for narrator lines
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately and speech bubbles for dialogue.
captions for narrator lines and speech uses captions for narrator lines and
bubbles for dialogue. speech bubbles for dialogue.
Expression Consistently uses above- and Somewhat consistently uses Does not use at-level vocabulary.
• vocabulary at-level vocabulary. at-level vocabulary. Does not use time cue words in
Effectively uses time cue words in Adequately uses time cue words in narrator lines.
narrator lines. narrator lines.
Conventions Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and accurately Does not use simple,
• complete simple, complete sentences. uses simple, complete sentences. complete sentences.
sentences Consistently spells above- or at-level Somewhat consistently spells at-level Does not spell at-level
• spelling vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly. vocabulary correctly.
• capitalization
Consistently and accurately uses Somewhat consistently and Does not use capital letters or end
• punctuation
capital letters and end punctuation. accurately uses capital letters and punctuation correctly.
Consistently and accurately end punctuation. Does not use multiple question marks
uses multiple question marks or Somewhat consistently and accurately or exclamation points to express very
exclamation points to express very uses multiple question marks or strong feelings.
strong feelings. exclamation points to express very
strong feelings.
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• What are my rights and responsibilities?
• How have I changed?
• What are my goals?
• Why do we dream?
• How do we explain prehistoric times?
• What challenges do humans face?
• How can I help?
• What would animals say to us?
• Could I be an inventor?
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