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Submitted by:
Lourraine Mara M. Alzate
MAED SCIENCE
Submitted on:
May 11, 2019
DIVINE WORD COLLEGE OF CALAPAN
Having safe and clean water is one of the life-long necessities needed by living organisms
to survive. It is a common abiotic factor as part of the ecosystem that complete the entire biosphere.
This study aimed to create greater awareness of parasitic contamination in the water environment
of the Philippines and also to act as a platform of the current scenario for policymakers The study
caught my attention due to the result of a survey wherein Calapan River is included in the Top
Dirtiest River in the Philippines. Dreaming to the change the world doesn’t start with a big step;
its challenge starts within or in the smallest value around you. There are a lot of water environments
or drinking sources present here in Calapan City and awareness should start within.
According to the study, Philippines is part of the developing countries that mirrors issues
with unavailability of clean water due to man-made factors. I agree with the statement in the study
that waterborne diseases and outbreaks was not curbed due to insufficient level of water education.
Problems will not arise for people who collect their water from water-filtering stations or treated-
water. This issue is not common in urban areas and rural areas where safe drinking water is paid.
It has its greatest impact to people in ethnic groups/ indigenous people and poor/deprived
communities. Another challenge in this study was the lack of reports on waterborne pathogen
occurrence, mainly maybe due to availability of materials. Testing of water should be immediately
processed in laboratories for detection of parasites but due to unavailability of laboratories that can
process the procedure, few studies were made about waterborne parasites. In the methods of the
study, to assess the existence of parasites in the Philippines, samples were collected from different
parts of the country. The study was purely scientific so the methods used were based from
protocols especially in the part of processing water samples. If this study will be conducted in
Calapan area, the filtering and screening process will be a huge problem. The samples that will be
collected should be tested immediately to gather reliable results. I am not fully aware of any
laboratories here in Calapan wherein you will be allowed to conduct your study using their
laboratory and materials. If ever there will be one, these kind of studies should be given
importance.
DIVINE WORD COLLEGE OF CALAPAN
Based from the results and conclusion, the samples from the drinking waters were free
from Cryptosporidium spp. and Giardia spp. contamination unlike in the rivers where all locations
were positive from its contamination. Regarding PCR analysis for Acanthamoeba spp and
Naegleria spp., its presence was detected in lower percentage but still the gathered samples were
contaminated. Physicochemical analysis of water samples shown that the data from the parameters
didn’t meet the minimal requirement for Dissolve oxygen and ammonia. The data presented
different contamination in different areas. Some data were surprising just like the contamination
of Cryptosporidium spp. and Giardia spp. in swimming pools while other data were common like
the presence of the same parasites in rivers where there are informal settles and slaughter house.
Acanthamoeba spp. and Naegleria spp. were detected in almost all recreational water stations and
some drinking water samples. Interpreting the data from the study was worrying considering that
The study regarding waterborne parasites as an issue in the Philippines gave a lot of
information that can also be a key to solve the problem. The researchers are aware that future
studies should be carried out in order to provide an extensive assessment with the occurrence of
parasites contamination in the water environment. Waterborne outbreaks have not been reported
yet in the Philippines, but should we wait for it to happen? This study is very beneficial to estimate
the prevalence of waterborne parasites in the Philippines, and also to inform and to educate about
the occurrence of water pathogens. We cannot immediately mandate people to stop the growing
population, irrigation needs, rapid industrialization and urbanization that cause the low availability
of clean water so educating and informing them would be a good step towards achieving clean and