Comments to Bad

Layouts
Group 2
Florian Faith Bayawa - DILG
Presa Villarina - BAS
Mary Jane Mayola PDI
Judi D. Acdal - DBM

1. No balance;
2. Too much text on
the other side and
too much picture on
the other side

1. No continuity of
text;
2. Small font size;
3. Did not properly
consume the
space

1. Color is boring;
2. The models
forehead has been
covered;
3. the cover doesnt
talk much about
whats inside;
4. Not attractive

1. The red line on

top has been
overlapped with a
picture;
2. No captions for
each picture;
3. One cannot see
the connection
between the
texts/captions and
the pictures;
4. Many font types

1. Too much color

or improper used of
color blend;
2. The color of the
title is not
distinguishable with
other subtitles.
3. the pages are
very disorganized
4. too much font
types used

1. Did not properly

consume the space;
2. Not so much
explanation on the
pictures;
3. Pictures were not
properly arranged;
4. All pictures
captions are fortune
5. Idle spaces

1. The color
doesnt match
the story;
2. Text font is too
small;
3. did not
properly
consume the
space

1. Diagonal effect
not appropriate;
2. Font color
combination;
3. Protein (such
as food) should
be presented in
the image

division/outlining
2. Not appealing
to the eyes
3. Too much
black color on
the page
4. The use of
font is not
appwaling

1. Overlapping of
models picture with
the name of the
magazine;
2. Label not in the
proper position

1. The
picture/image was
cut
2. Not so much
text

1. One leg is
missing in the
models body;
2. Photoshop
error;

1. Text alignment /
directions / or
positioning

1. Images were not

properly shown;
2. Text alignment;
3. Continuity of the
text/story

1. No
connection
of the picture
and the
headline /
Misrepresent
ation

positioning /
wrong
placement of
the headline
and the title
below it
since there
is no
connection;
2. Bold
letters eat
too much

1.
Misrepresentation
of the title and the
picture/image on
the same page;

1. The picture of
the minor was not
blurred

2. Wrong position
of the picture on the
center of the
column

1. No connection /
relation of the story
to the picture/image
or there is
misrepresentation.

1. The picture /
image does not
depict the name
of the fruit

1. Something wrong
with the picture
positioning of the
two adjacent pages

1.
Misrepresent
ation of the
image/pictur
e and the
title

1. Misrepresentation
or the picture/image
used was
inappropriate for the
headline

1. There is
misrepresentation
of the
image/picture and
the title

1. Typo error

Typographical
error

The presence of the

word fuck

Error with the

word Click here

Wrong
placement of
image and title

Wrong placement of
picture/image and the
title

Wrong placement
of photo

Wrong picture /
wrong placement

Where or a Whore?

Where or a whore??

Wrong photo/
placement /
misrepresentation

wrong picture

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

Two ADS
should not be
adjacent

Wrong
placement

lol

Placement of title,
should not be
adjacent

Shit yourself