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PERFORMANCE
Writing 800/4
Section 2:
Academic Essay (50 mins x 60 marks)
WR Q1 FORMULA:
TITLE
I + OV
KFs
S
rise
gain
increase
improve
escalate
incline
high/higher/
highest
more than
most
2)
fall/drop
loss
decrease
depreciate
deteriorate
decline
low/lower/
lowest
less than
least
3)
4)
stable/
stabilise
constant
consistent
erratic
fluctuating
unstable
inconsistent
USEFUL ADJECTIVES
slight/steady/gradual
sharp/steep/drastic
doubled/tripled/quadrupl
ed
record high/record low
Tourism in Malaysia
(I) The stimuli show a bar graph comparing
tourist arrivals in Malaysia, Thailand and
Indonesia, a table of the top five tourist
markets of income earned from tourism in
Malaysia and a newspaper headline on the
drop of tourist arrivals. (OV) The general
trend is a decrease of tourist arrivals and
tourism income in Malaysia.
20 18 17 15 14 11
10 7
64
30
Language &
Organisation
20 18 17 15 14 11
10 7
64
30
TOTAL
40 34 33 27 26 21 20 14
13 7
60
RECOMMENDED
ESSAY STRUCTURE
FOR MID TO HIGH PROFICIENCY
STUDENTS:
MODEL 1
MODEL 1
ADVANTAGES
Promotes critical
thinking skills
DISADVANTAGES
Unfocussed
Danger of going out
of topic
RECOMMENDED
ESSAY STRUCTURE
FOR LOW TO MID
PROFICIENCY
STUDENTS:MODEL
MODEL 2
ADVANTAGES
Helps students
achieve basic
proficiency by
providing structures
Boosts confidence
and motivation to
write
Aids in developing
and organising ideas
DISADVANTAGES
Stifles creativity
Repetitive style of
writing
Monotonous for
examiner to mark
1 Paragraph - Introduction:
st
2 Paragraph - Point 1:
nd
3 Paragraph - Point 2:
rd
4 Paragraph - Point 3:
th
5 Paragraph - Conclusion:
th
B B B B
a an a an
n d n d
d 4 d 2
5
3
Tas 30 25 20 15 10
k
Fulf 26 21 16 11 6
ilm
ent
Lan 30 25 20 15 10
gua
ge 26 21 16 11 6
&
B
a
n
d
1
5
0
5
0