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WRITING

BUSINESS LETTERS &


MEMO

LECTURE 8

BUSINESS COMMUNICATION [BUS103]

Objective
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Follow accepted conventions of format to


make the letter readable

Identify reader and purpose

Include information appropriate to the


purpose

Use the order of information suited to good


news, bad news and persuasive letters
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Personal Letter
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Layout of a Business
Letter

Letterhead
Stationery
Reference
Date
Salutation
Heading

Signature
Block

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Inside
Address

The
Message/ Body
of Letter

Complimentary
Close
Senders Name

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Letterhead

Date

Day/month/year
Month/day/year

Inside address

Companys name, address and tel/telex/fax


numbers

Shows full name, full postal address, town and


postcode

Salutation

Dear Sir/Madam/Sirs/John/Mr John


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Continued
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Subject line

Body

Purpose
Separate into paragraphs with a new idea in
each, with one line space between each
paragraph

Complementary close

Match Dear Sir with Yours faithfully


Match Dear (personalised) with yours
sincerely

Signature block

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Salutation and Complimentary Close


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Example Opening and


Closing

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The body of Letter


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Other parts of a
business letter

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Confidential/Airmail/First Class/Urgent

Attention Line

Copy reference

Blind copies

Signing on employers behalf

pp Writer Name and Position


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Types of
layout

Full block

Full block
with
centred letterhead

Modified block


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Full Block
Business Letter

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Modified Block
Business Letter

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Planning the business


letter

Decide on the purpose of the letter

Decide what you want to say

Write all the ideas in point form

Order ideas into a sequence appropriate to the type


of letter

Write first draft using plain English style

Read the letter to ensure that you have achieved


your purpose

Rewrite if necessary
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Writing strategy for good news


or neutral letters

Good news letters announce the good news first

The writing strategy is direct order of information


1.

Identify letters purpose in the subject line or opening


paragraph

2.

Place the good news in the opening paragraph

3.

State the details that support the good news in


the middle paragraphs

4.

Close with a statement of goodwill

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Sample
Good News Letter

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Direct approach
purpose of writing
The good news
The detail

Statement of
goodwill

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Four types of good


news letters
Letter of enquiry
Letter of request
Letter of
acknowledgement
Letter of introduction

Letter of Inquiry
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1.

2.

3.
4.

Identify with the inquiry in the subject


line
Open with the inquiry and a short
background if necessary
Indicate how the receiver is to respond
Close in courteous and friendly manner

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Letter of Request
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1.
2.

3.

4.

Identify the request in the subject line


If you choose to omit the subject line,
identify the request and give brief
reason or background for it in the
opening paragraph
Ask for specific response to your
request
Close courtesy to maintain goodwill

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Letter of Acknowledgement
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1.
2.
3.

4.

Start with acknowledgement


Say yes clearly when relevant
Supply and necessary information or
details
Close courtesy o maintain goodwill

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Letter of Introduction
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Use a subject line to catch reader's


attention
2. Open by explaining your reason for the
introduction
3. Supply detail and information in the
middle paragraphs to create desire to
read further
4. Close by saying what you can do for the
reader and what you want the reader to
do
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Writing strategy for a bad news


letter
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A bad news letter gives the reader


unwelcome news

The writing strategy is indirect order of


information

Open with a neutral buffer

Explain the situation

Give the refusal or negative news

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Close with a positive paragraph

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Sample
Bad News Letter

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Open with a
neutral buffer
Explain the
situation
Give the refusal
or negative news

Close with a
positive
paragraph

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Four types of bad news


letters
Order of refusal
A credit refusal
An adjustment
refusal
An invitation or
request refusal

An order refusal
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1.
2.
3.
4.

Start by acknowledging the order


Explain the reason for the refusal
State the refusal
Close with a courteous expression of
interest in continuing your relationship
with customer.

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1.
2.

3.
4.

Start with neutral opening


Explain the factors considered in t he
decision
State the refusal clearly and courtesy
Close by courtesy inviting the receiver
to contact your organisation

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An adjustment refusal
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1.

2.
3.
4.

Start with a neutral paragraph


acknowledging the adjustment request
Explain the reason for the decision
State the refusal courteously
Close with a courteous attempt to
maintain the customer goodwill

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Refusing invitation or
request
1.

2.
3.

4.

Start with a neutral buffer, preferably


by expressing your appreciation of the
invitation or request
Give detail explanations
State the refusal clearly courteously
and tactfully
Close by expressing interest in the
other person or organization

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Writing Memo : Objectives


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Describe the format of memorandum

List the advantages of the


memorandum

Explain how to plan and write


memorandum

Writing different types of


memorandum

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Sample of Memo Format 1


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MEMORANDUM
To:
From:
Date:
Subject:

Sample of Memo Format 2


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Advantages of Memorandum

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Reaches
Reaches large
large
number
number of
of people
people
at
at the
the same
same time
time

Provides
Provides aa
written
written record
record
to
to refer
refer

Allows
Allows detailed
detailed or
or
difficult
difficult information
information
To
To be
be logically
logically and
and
accurately
accurately relayed
relayed

Can
Canindicate
indicatethat
that
information
informationititcontains
contains
is
part
of
the
is part of the
organisations
organisationsprocedure
procedure

Writing Memos
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Identify the subject

Select and order information

Write simply

Use a suitable tone

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Types of Memo
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Instruction memo

Request memo

Announcement
memo

Transmittal memo

Authorisation memo

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Sample of
Announce
ment
Memo

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